Review Detail of Kakkarotto in Subordination system

Item: Subordination system
Rating: 1

Review detail

KakkarottoLv103yrKakkarotto

The story development is too random and vrmmo game structure is giant a*s plothole. No character development what so ever. 👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎

Subordination system

a_regular_student

Liked it!

Replies2

a_regular_studentAuthora_regular_student

Thanks for the critic, could you please elaborate on the issues you had, as I would like to try and fix them.

3yr

Katherine_EmmettLv4Katherine_Emmett

author there is no issue as someone who has read all the current chapters I can say the the game aspect is not at all a plot hole you are doing great and it is amazing story

a_regular_student:Thanks for the critic, could you please elaborate on the issues you had, as I would like to try and fix them.

2yr