Like the story’s main plot so far but have a lot of character holes that need to be ironed out. There are grammatical errors that need to be corrected so worse than others. Punctuations arent used properly at times either. MC does some contradicting things at times but that is ok as people do that in real life. Hope it gets edited before you charge people but good luck.
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