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TheLunchTrae1yrCommentedThis way of quickly aging him is crazy š
The Kane on the floor was very different from the one that entered the cocoon. He now looked like a 12-year-old and was roughly 160 cm tall. He was now a little tanned, unlike his previous pale complexion. It seemed that his adaptation mutation had evolved as it modified his skin to help him handle the Dyssiodian empire's hot climate.- TheLunchTrae1yrCommented
āAre you a freeloaderā šššš
"You claim to be my Master's father, yet never have I seen you. Not once when he was weak, until now. Are you a freeloader?" Kaladin leaned in close, looking Eugene straight in the eyes. - TheLunchTrae1yrCommented
Mmm. Just a casual journey to a different universe. Of course.
"Yeah, I think I can portal out of the multiverse and into another multiverse." Zell said. "Want to try it?" - TheLunchTrae1yrCommented
For anyone confused, he gained +4 for the 2 levels, and then used 9 points to get his INT up to 100. 87+4+9 = 100. 32-9 = 23.
[Blank Points: 32 --> 23] - TheLunchTrae1yrCommented
Wrong name I think?
This paragraph has been deleted. - TheLunchTrae1yrCommentedCh 262 Linking the Black-Jaguar Village.
- TheLunchTrae1yrCommentedCh 513 Chapter 513 Before the Ice Elvesā Council
- TheLunchTrae2yrReplied to GardenDevil
What else were you expecting to see there? Lol
[Race] Human - TheLunchTrae2yrPosted
Everything was greatā¦ until chapter 602. It basically erased all of the content up until that point for the sake of plot, which kinda justā¦ sucks. I really liked the side characters, and I liked the general way things worked in the world. I also liked how the plot was focused primarily on Earth. Now, itās just not the same. It was fantastic up until the alien invasion part, but kinda just went downhill after that. Assuming the novel hasnāt been dropped, Iāll probably just keep skimming chapters until it gets back to the stuff I enjoyed more. My rating is still good, because the story was good up until this point, but I do feel the quality dropped off pretty hard. Itās just frustrating to read, and I really wish the plot had taken it in a different direction rather than just dropping pretty much everything except the main character.
- TheLunchTrae2yrCommentedCh 163 Monke and the Siege (1)
- TheLunchTrae2yrPosted
As someone who reads quite a lot, I just wanted to let you know how much Iāve enjoyed the story. This is the first story Iāve read in a while the has really drawn me in and made me want to keep reading. Itās not perfect, by any means, but itās nailed what I consider to be the most important part of any story, which is successfully drawing me in and making them want more. And more than that, I really like 3 main characters. If I had to point out anything though, I would question as to why the swear words are all censored? It hasnāt affected my enjoyment, but does seem odd to me.