Reviews of Strongest Swordsman In One Piece

It's a nice translation i read mtl fics and i know what you are doing is not ez and i really appreciate it _____________________________

Not that great. A lot of your typical Chinese style writing. 80% talking about how great the mc is or about his abilities. 20% about story. Tried reading as much as I could but it’s prett annoying just reading useless mc internal dialog or random junk that has no part of the story

Hopefully this gets translated fully. I’am interested in any one peice fanfiction that likes to explore swordsmenship. I pray that he doesn’t eat a devil fruit.

Only female crewmates: check Author being a virgin: check Creating an OP char which ruins the balance at the start: check Being a cringy edgelord who can't portray emotions: check Leaving a 1 star review: check

where to find the free chaps for raw for 55+ ? .

i just want to know did he abandoned other children from the opanage even when he've enough power to defeat every person in the opanage or was he the one in the opanage or the dean is so strong, so he 've no choice but to escape alone?

Writing quality: There are many mistakes and some things are in such a way written, which you normaly wouldn't write that way, so it is wierd. Story development: Cant say much about it, only read a few chapters but it was okay, not really good but not that bad either Character design: You don't learn much about him, his childhood was skipped, could have been done much better Update stability: Yeah idk about that so 5 stars Wolrd background: One Piece, nothing more to say about it

The cover is hella sus ... m

I'm the last review you need for the star to appear 😏 (............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................)

It's worth reading and it doesn't get annoying. In fact, it's satisfying. Mm. There weren't many things left. MC had grown to the point of being the most powerful. Still, the translations stopped at Ch272; here, there are only 218.

Tentei muito ler essa história. Primeiro tem bastante erros gramaticais e não sou muito exigente. Mesmo assim dá de ler se ignorar bastante. Segundo o autor fala detalhes uniteis. Ele fala de mais sobre crianças. Sim são crianças não importa o quanto eles estão desenvolvidos fisicamente eles são crianças. Eu particularmente não gostei disso. Mas consegui continuar lendo pensando que a idade deles é o que eles aparentam ter. Agora o que me fez largar isso são capítulo sobre à akuma no mi favorita do MC. Primeiro tem bastante coisaa ilogicas com a munch-munch fruit mas dá de ignorar também essa coisa mórbida de synthèse de cadaveres. Agora o cara tem como ter um monte de frutas de diabo que pode escolher por essa habilidade. Ele parece um cara inteligente e escolhe a opção de flutuar. Considerando que sua esgrima é destrutiva o suficiente e ele não precisa de mais poder destrutivo isso pode fazer sentido. Senão fazer flutuar coisas com um toque não parece muito impressionante ao lado da fruta Rumble rumble (ele pode voar com relâmpago). Não entendo o motivo da escola dessa fruta. Agora usar a fruta para fazer météores pode parecer incrível mas é inútil contra um monte de inimigos possíveis. Luffy por exemplo, usuários das frutas logia outro exemplo. Fora isso temos também usuários de haki que podem resistir de certa forma. Agora se a questão é ser um trunfo estratégico, uma opção para ser uma ameaça ao mundo e causar dano em larga escala sem considerar as consequências isso é um bom fruto.

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Ill give world bg and update stability a props. 5/5 But man. Writing quality or should I say the translation is poor. Very hard to read .Character development he's becoming a hypocrite. In an unlikable way.Even more so tge character design 👎👎. Ignoring the MC, the side characters feel too bland. Even then I had enjoyed reading it. But not. until ch 150 .

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Una historia muy buena, aunque el final estuvo muy apresurado, pero es mejor eso que tener un final malo. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

big fan of this fanfic keep it up author 👍