Heavy Punch Winner
I really tried but i just couldn't force my self to continue. the world building is just mehm the mc decision making skills are nonexistent and illogical and the whole world logic doesn't make sense at all. like how could you contribute something that you inherited via genetics like height for example to your math teacher teaching skills. how is asking teachers regular questions considered dangerous and troublesome, its their job for gods sake. if you have more than one neuron in ur cns don't bother with this.
alright, this book is truly great. This is definitely a good read if you have the time. The tone and direction of the book goes through such a shift that I think the worst part of this book is the title. The title only reflects the mc's beginning and thats it. It does not reflect his goal,the world or anything. please pick a better title for the book next time.
kinda disappointed, i didn't expect high art or something but even for a light hearted op novel this one is under average. The MC just doesn't feel op, the whole world and everything that happens feels fake and boring .even the characters the MC included don't have any real personality. So I dropped it after the free ch. i had hopes for a bit more and got a lot less
I JUST GOT DONE WITH CHAPTER 63 AND JUST AS IM POSTING THIS I SAW THAT THE BOOK IS COMPLETED AND THAT SUCKS SO I HOPE THAT ALL OF THIS COMES TRUE!!! THE MC SHOULD BE WITH THE 2 SISTER AND THE THE TEACHER.... I KNOW SHE IS A LITTLE OLDER THEN THEM BUT FROM WHAT IS WRITEN IN THE BOOK IT MAKES U FEEL LIKE SHE ISNT THAT MUCH OLDER THEN THEM AND THAT HER PWERS R INCREDIBLE AND SHE CAN ALWAYS HELP THEM IF THEY NEED IT SO WOULDNT BE A GREAT THING TO HAVE SOMEONE THAT HAS A VAST KNOWLEDGE AND IS A LITTLE MORE MATURE THEN THE SISTERS... I MEAN HAVING BOTH FUN AND YOUTHFUL BE AWESOME AND IF 1 PERSON CAN HAVE THAT THAT WOULD BE EVEN BETTER BUT IF U CAN DO IT WITH MAKING UP A GROUP AND THE GROUP OF PEOPLE THAT HE WOULD LOVE TO BE WITH HE CAN ALWAYS HELP THEM LETER ON TO GET STRONGER AND THE SISTERS R NICE AND BEAUTIFUL AND THE TEACHER IS BEAUTIFUL AND MATURE SO Y WOULDNT HE WANT TO BE WITH THEM... THEY EITHER ALL GO AFTER HIM AT THE SAME TIME OR HE GOSE AFTER THEM AT THE SAME TIME OR HAVE HIM GO AFTER THE SISTERS AND HAVE THE TEACHER GO AFTER HIM RIGHT BEFORE THE GODSLAYING THING HAVE HER GO TO HIM AND TELL HIM THAT SHE WILL BE WAITING FOR THEM ALL TO COME BACK THIS WAY HE CAN TALK TO THE 2 SISTERS WHILE THEY R DOING THE MISSION AND HAVE A THING TO LOOK TO AND GET BACK IN ONE PIECE.... WOULD IT BE WORTH IT AND THEN HAVE THE PRINCIPAL TELL THE MC THAT HE WILL GOVE HIM EVERY INFORMATION AND ANYTHING ELES WHEN THEY COME BACK JUST DONT HAVE IT KNOW THAT TEACHER CHRIS KNOWS SO THIS WAY IT WONT PUSH HER AWAY FROM HIM AND JUST COME OUT AND HAVE IT BE THAT SHE ONLY KNOW THAT THE PRINCIPAL KNEW A LOT ABOUT WJAT HAPPENED ALL THOSE YEARS AGO THIS WAY SHE CAN BE WITH HIM AND SHE CAN ALSO HELP HIM IF NEEDED BECAUSE SHE HAS MORE KNOWLEDGE THEN THE 2 SISTERS SO SHE WOULD BE A GREAT HELP AND ALL THAT SO IT WOULD BE GRWAT IF THE 4 OF THEM CAN BE TOGETHER AND NOT HAVE PROBLEMS AND BECOME A FAMILY AND EVERYTHING!! DONT MIND THE CAPS MY PHONE IS BROKE!!
absolutely ridiculous. All adults acts like 6 yo. Trying to force a 18 yo to join military as a squad leader with no experience in neither leading nor discipline. Celebrating for going on a walk. Trying to force him to change school (and principal forcing him to stay). Girl trying to kill him for being friends with a classmate (girls are both in same year and class).
I'm already about 20 chapters into the novel and I can say this is one of the most inconsistent and confused story o have read. World background is so shallow, character development is trash, story is almost non-existent. Plot, stories and events are not well explained it is more like the Author is in a rush and gives half information. Power system is just terrible, and characters seem behave strangely and inconsistent. In short although Author might have a good idea or story, this is poorly written with not much preparation or any form of proof reading.
The characters are lifeless, there's no real plot. Some plot issues are fixed and thickens in later chapters, after chapter 150-200, but I believe the author completely forgot he was writing a LitRPG with a system and turned the whole thing in to a Fantasy story. There is no mention of his OP system, stats or system shop.... Author-sama, do you even know what kind of story you're writing?