it's teen spirit, it smells like teen spirit

it's starts pretty good overall the first few chapters are pretty upbeat, and the development is nicely paced and gives time for the characters to develop a bit. Sadly, after the time skip, it goes just downhill. The character changes from a calm and collected character to a cold shifty one. It kinda takes all the fun out of the story and doesn't make much sense to me as even the plot gets darker with little to no world building in that direction. The story overall is not bad, but I didn't enjoy it in the later half.

I don't know, truthfully Sansa is basirhe Ginny Weasly of GOT in the worst way. Fingerling for her Hero, delusional until you break her out of it and more Tully than Stark. There are better options

that's not stealing, that is Looting, and if you beat a trashmob, it's only polite to also loot them

hmm, if it's like that, wouldn't there be some people running around with a Divine Grade plug up the Bumm ? You know for that sweet internal and external power absorption

it's OK, I guess. The DxD arc while pretty rushed was fine overall, the story kinda lost me somewhere in the middle of the Tensura Arc, I just didn't enjoy how the world building was handled, the Dimensions mumbo jumbo, and the Time spans that were used. At some point, there was less fun stuff for me and more meh plot points on a list with more Higher Dimensions Bs mixed into it. That doesn't mean it was bad or anything, but I personally enjoyed it far less.

Maple from Gravity Falls

welcome to the dark side

Doesn't he know that he has the Nika fruit ?

Most people would assume he got shot, i mean with the pain and the sound of a Gunshot and all. Or he hot yeeted of the Mortal coil by a random Brick that drop from a Building

It's pretty ok so far . Not that big of a fan how the story develops or the Charters tho. Percy feels like he is even more a playball of the Gods than the first Time around, with Nyx and Chaos messing with him whenever they want for there amusement. For someone who Traveled back in Time after fighting in multiple wars he also feels weaker than he should, mostly because the Gods / Primordial use him a entertainment of sorts. The story is not bad but i honestly expect a more free and Badass MC

Writing is good, structure is also fine, pace is pretty slow but ok. I'm not that happy with the story development or the character designs because they barely differ from the Originals with the MC being a bit different and extra Drama added. So overall it's just a more Drama filled and depressing version of the Original that already wasn't a very Happy story to begin with if your read all the Volumes. With the whole NTR tag thing I'm split, i get that it's not technically NTR because the MC wasn't physical with her but in gernal most considered NTR if the love interest of an MC gets stolen in any way shape or Form and therefore the Drama and why people aren't happy. I find the whole Arc is Overdramatic just for Dramas sake.

The first few chapters are pretty funny but later it's gets more and more disjointed and is just plain crack with no plot. And with no plot it's hard calling it a story. But overall ok for what it is

Pretty good so far keep going. Kinda reminds me of an other fanfic of DxD with a similar flow, can remover much just that it had an OP MC in it and some green Robot Dog but for the love of god i can't remember the name. anyway keep going

For those wondering who she is. Yang XIN is the chick from the Alchemy Association.

It is a testament to my abundance of useless knowledge and trivia that i could read a French fraise without knowing basically any French and while it's written incorrect. Tragic that in exchange i can't remember Birthdays without a notifications.

should the Blessing from Opis or the Unlimited Man's not give more of a boost

Who introduces himself like that? Hi I'm Bob, i hold the Highscore in Gitarre Hero

True, but what a Brutally hard world to start in if you have the choice. I mean you have literally nearly completely Immune to Death kinda Gods running Amok in that world, same with Monsters all with more than one way to kill you with some BS powers, together with the Fates/ Norn's. Sounds interesting anyways. If i got the choice for a starting World it would most likely be Harry Potter, fairy Safe if you stay out of the Bloodwar stuff, Magic and Semi Modern Technology.

Technically the story is solid, writing and basic world building is ok, just the Character Designs are a bit strange and very AU at Times. Not really a fan of the MC Character Design, there is a difference of being Dark and just being a wanker and at times the MC dips very strongly in the wanker category. So far he mainly comes of as self entitled, ungrateful and sometimes just plain arrogant with no reason to be. Otherwise the progression of the story is ok, but the MC is just not for me because his many personal flaws kinda put me off