Ultramar
Hello dear readers, author speaking here. other that the shameless rating, i write this to clarify a few things about this story. First of all this is an original story that iam writing on my own and i am projecting at least 1 chapter a day. Secondly, i have already planned out pretty much every ark from start to finish, so i have a clear vision about what i will write and the world i am creating. and lastly i hpe you enjoy it and keep in mind this is my first work ever. Thank you for your time and i hpe you have fun.
Hello author! I have read this book and it is very different And unique concept to the other novels I have read about same genres. This can surely hold readers interest. here are some of my suggestions That I like to recommend So your book can be more appealing ; -you can use Grammarly For improving your writing. -And upload Your content daily. That ‘s it. I hope you can take into account my suggestions regarding your work. Here is my 5 stars not only for your plot but also for your courage to write. As an author I also know it’s Hard to take first steps so I wish you to be a successful Writer. Keep it up!
This is extremely well written when compared to everything else on webnovel. There are some minor grammar issues and the story has a few smudges here and there, but as of right now (chap 32), it is great! I will make a more detailed review upon reaching chapter 100. Questions for the Author. Monogamy? Magic? P.S: How are your Ultrasmurfs doing? Tell Papa Smurf I said hi.
The medieval world setting is quite captivating. The author manages to maintain a dynamic between telling the story and presenting the scenario. What keeps the reader submerged in history. It's certainly one of the stories that caught me the most. I'm curious about the arc of achievement promised in the synopsis. I recommend that future readers set aside some cookies with milk to read. I guarantee you will love the story!
First of all, I am sorry for the late review(I had things going on IRL) Now as for the story, The male lead transmigrates to another world or land I can say. Though I have read many books on the theme of transmigration I never read very least where the male lead trans migrates so this was something new yet old to me. As for the flow of the story and writing style I gave it all four cuz, there wasn't anything to call as a mistake here. And the updating rate is good too. so overall this was a nice pick! Good luck Author~ I am keeping this book in my collection.