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Jonas321

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As an amateur writer and non-native Eng speaker, I write to improve my skills and share my passion for storytelling. Join me on this journey. Thank you for being a part of it.

2020-12-13 JoinedBrazil
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  • Jonas321
    Jonas3213mth
    Replied to F_E_X_A

    perfect hahahaha

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    Reign of Evil: Tales of Villainy
    Fantasy ¡ Jonas321
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  • Jonas321
    Jonas3213mth
    Replied to Aj_Saunders

    It's a good idea!! Thanks my friend!!!!

    Inquisitor Adrian Silver began to walk slowly out of the shadows, revealing his black cassock like midnight, adorned with sacred symbols that emitted a subtle glow in the church's dim light. Over it, he wore a red velvet cape that billowed dramatically with each step, giving him an aura of dark authority.
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    Reign of Evil: Tales of Villainy
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  • Jonas321
    Jonas3214mth
    Replied to JBFIRE_77

    I share the same aversion to relationships that become limiting factors!!!

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    Reign of Evil: Tales of Villainy
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  • Jonas321
    Jonas3214mth
    Commented

    thanks for the chapter!!

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  • Jonas321
    Jonas3214mth
    Posted

    The author demonstrates mastery in crafting a captivating narrative, standing out for the skill in developing an engaging plot, characterizing individuals in a detailed manner, and creating a world rich in details. The plot is well-balanced, featuring intriguing twists that keep the reader eagerly anticipating what will happen next. The meticulous description of the characters fosters an emotional connection, delving convincingly into their motivations. Overall, the work transcends mere storytelling, providing a captivating literary experience!!!! Keep up the excellent work, author!!!!!!!!

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    EDEN LOCKER 'S MAGUS SYSTEM {I-XI} And THE BLACK CREST FAMILY
    Fantasy ¡ Ninestar619_5803
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  • Jonas321
    Jonas3214mth
    Posted

    Here's the shameless author, lol! 😄 I want to express my gratitude to everyone following this story! Thank you so much for the amazing suggestions and ideas. You guys are fantastic!!!!!! May our journey with wicked characters reign eternally!!!

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    Reign of Evil: Tales of Villainy
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  • Jonas321
    Jonas3214mth
    Posted

    I love all the villain characters in the story! I believe our tastes align in this regard. Therefore, it's practically impossible for me to give a low rating to the story. May the evil protagonists continue to reign forever!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😈👑

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    Atonement's Path
    Fantasy ¡ FriedrichFriedrice
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  • Jonas321
    Jonas3214mth
    Commented
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    Atonement's Path
    Fantasy ¡ FriedrichFriedrice
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  • Jonas321
    Jonas3214mth
    Posted

    I really enjoyed it!!!! The narrative invites readers to immerse themselves in a story where love intertwines harmoniously with adventure. It's a captivating adventure unfolding over the darkness, creating a dynamic and engaging plot!!!!

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    Eclipse of Eternity: A Duel of Gods
    Fantasy ¡ Mask_Xd
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  • Jonas321
    Jonas3214mth
    Replied to Darja_Renen

    ty

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  • Jonas321
    Jonas3214mth
    Posted

    The reading of the work was truly engaging, despite its limited number of chapters. I would suggest exercising caution with lengthy paragraphs, as it may make it challenging for readers to follow and mark, potentially leading to a more tiresome reading experience. Regarding the development, the promise of future unfolding adds an additional layer of complexity, sparking excitement for what is to come. In summary, the work demonstrates notable potential!!!! Keep up the excellent work!!!!!!!!

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    Jonas3214mth
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  • Jonas321
    Jonas3214mth
    Posted

    The reading experience of this work is truly engaging, especially due to the deep immersion into the gaming universe. The protagonist's power adds a fascinating layer to the plot, I confess it inspired me!!! I thank the author for providing a captivating and thrilling narrative!!!!!!!

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  • Jonas321
    Jonas3214mth
    Commented

    Suspect!! '-'

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  • Jonas321
    Jonas3214mth
    Commented

    Okay, this is unexpected. I confess, I'm intrigued. Will she be allied with NPCs and an adversary to players???

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  • Jonas321
    Jonas3214mth
    Commented

    It's an interesting power!!!!

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  • Jonas321
    Jonas3214mth
    Posted

    The engaging plot not only delves into the challenges imposed by Maya's curse but also unveils her quest for freedom amidst the abolition of Paraluman's dominant class. The duality of her existence, born with warrior power yet raised as a slave, adds an intriguing layer to the narrative. A work that captivates and promises an exciting journey.

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  • Jonas321
    Jonas3214mth
    Posted

    It's a true pleasure to witness the success of a fellow Brazilian compatriot in their works. Undoubtedly, this is one of the best adventure novels I've had the opportunity to read. The author's skill in captivating the reader and crafting a compelling plot is remarkable, providing a unique reading experience!!!!!

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    Amon, The Legendary Overlord
    Fantasy ¡ Lruska
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  • Jonas321
    Jonas3214mth
    Replied to solracmar

    It's a good point!!!!!

    Ch 1 Crypt Tavern
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    Secrets of the Steampunk Wizard
    Fantasy ¡ Rqmk
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  • Jonas321
    Jonas3214mth
    Posted

    The story presents a promising narrative that initially dedicates its first chapters to introducing the world and characters to the readers. This approach is crucial to establish a solid context and engage the readers in the universe of the plot. However, it is from the fourth chapter onwards that the narrative gains momentum, immersing the reader in actions and events that prove to be captivating and intriguing. This turning point, where the plot truly takes off, creates a hook that grabs the reader's attention, encouraging them to eagerly continue reading. I enjoyed it a lot!!!!!

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    Muse of the Dragon Rider
    Fantasy ¡ Koko_Palibino
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