Reviews of Rise of King Arthur

A pervert/horny system 🤔🤔🤔 it's the first I've ever seen a system used like this more rarely on KING ARTHUR😳😳😳 but give it a read PRONTO☺️👍

Helo there This is a good job, you should keep it. Maybe you could teach how to make this wonderful story. Nothing that I can say about it, wonderful. Hope the best for your future.

I am very glad I came across this novel. Arthur would be such and interesting character. I like the starting of the book, really captivating. You're a good writer.

How very interesting. You definitely stand out from the crowd of so many systems with the uniqueness of your system, which is really important in making your web novel known in the vast sea of system novels that people could be reading. After hearing that English isn't your native language, I just had to congratulate you more. Well done author. Much Respects.

From what I've read so far, it's really quite a decent read. With the current update quality and the progress the book is making, it has incredible potential to succeed with a few more touch ups. Keep it up author!

I had a "The Beginning after the End" feels here but it is of course different. The flow of the story is good. The characters are well-written. I won't point out the minor grammatical errors since it is unnecessary. In anyway, good luck on you work!

I really love reincarnation and harem. Bit I piteid MC the most. The poor thing. The plot synopsis is great specially rebirth. I would give a read to your other novels. You have really got talent in writing. More power to you.

I've started to like reading novels where the character is in a world of magic and demons, it makes the plot really interesting! Your detail is absolutely amazing and its easy to imagine each scene and the characters are well written too!

This story is great! The plot is really interesting and it immediately caught my eye. Frankly, I'm very curious about the main character and his life. Questions keep on popping in my head, like, What's gonna happen next? What's he gonna do? The way you write is stunning. How you described everything makes it easier for a reader to imagine! So overall, I love it! And i hope you continue!

This book is well written. The characters and world background is good. I love how the system were portrayed well. Arthur's thoughts were funny and enjoyable to read uwu. Good work! Keep it up author!

This is a good story! I have read the first few chapters and you did a great job in your first chapter. I didn't expect it to be a system-type novel which I didn't usually read but it's a good reading experience for me. Keep up the good work author!:)

Okay, so my review for this novel, the Writing Quality seems good to me but I think it can do some work to make it more elegant, but if you want to stay writing like this, it's fine. Now story development, it was very good. The world background is fine while I do have to say, I felt like the characters were slightly cliched, like only slightly, but other than that. It's an entertaining book for me :D

This story is really good, just to be honest... Your typical harem bullshitery turned to something amazing and palpable... But what amazed me the most are not the characters, pacing, or world building... It's the narrative... The author writes the story with vivid imagination and detailed narrations... leaving the readers with desire to read more... Anyways, this is a good book and keep up the good work

The story of King Arthur takes you into the world through the captivating words. What is a lust system, eh? Weird and witty. Good job author. More power to you.

Hello! Your reader here! I can say you loved your work! It was funny sometimes and the details were splendidly elaborated. I love reincarnation and system novels so this is a plus for me!

Tried to clean up the first few chaps a bit, but there were way too many so I gave up, But it wasn't like the sentences were incomprehensible, so it's all good. Just need a little polishing. I've read about 7 chaps, skipping the r18 scene, but it felt like you bring out the system UI a bit too much. Maybe just highlight the changes that happened, or just put it in the comments, if you want to keep the readers updated. Haven't gotten to chara development and wOrld building yet, but I'll give you the benefit of the doubt and trust you on it. If I read further, maybe i'll leave another review ~

I like how you portray your protagonist author. The way he thinks is amusing and likeable. Your story setting is captivating and mind blowing. I hope you keep writing more interesting chapters, I look forward to it. Great job author! Keep up the good work!

Hey, good job with your story. The plot is interesting and keeps the readers hooked. You have shown your protagonist's personality quite well throughout the chapters which I think is quite important and not easy.

to be honest, i was expecting some sort of Merlin gig here... but i have to say that this system novel is quite the catch. keep it up and improve the update speed.

We are all here to learn and improve our skills and talents. The idea is great! It is something "fresh" on Webnovel. Only with our hard work and termination we are able to develop some standards... No matter what you write about, it is important that the story has, what is most important - the topic (it does not have to be a unique problem that has never been discussed by anyone before), credibility, hero, settings, emotions and the correct language, style, and workshop. So I encourage you to work hard on the text. I am not English speaker, but I see a lot of grammar, interpunctions and stylistic errors. I would suggest that you first make a specific plan of the storyline, decide about the specifics of particular characters and try to follow that. I wish you an inspiration and a lot of great ideas!