Bear with this line of text. It has a very important meaning to the story as you'll see in the future chapters.

In this setting, Sharen is a masculine name. It's fantasy but I apologise if it still sounds buggy to the ears.

Probably so. It wasn't justifiable but it was something that came from impulse.

Thanks for reading. I have other books in the fantasy genre as well and currently The Tenth Victim 1 is completed (happy reading)! You can search me on Facebook--for my page though--Saviouribokauthor. P.s. if you search that page name and can't find it then try Savoureads (The former name is Savoureads but I recently changed it to Saviouribokauthor and Facebook might take a while to update the info. Thanks, hugs!

thanks for reading so far. It's an honour to have you. Consider sending in a review and also reading my other book, Haklaran Hunter, if you're into fantasy.

The characters have internal struggles (much like every human being does) and they have to face them. they can't just jump in to the mood. It's called character development.

It's a very important part of the novel. I put them in curly braces so it will stand out. the importance of these short texts will be seen in later chapters. I can't say much so I don't spoil the plot. Thanks.

You need to understand that this is a fantasy setting and in this world, Sharen is a man's name. You can't judge it as if it was in reality. Also, you should not drop the book because of a character name (you'll get used to that) but you should read on to see if the plot interests you before making a decision to drop it.

It wouldn't be wise to skim over. Sharen had to surrender to save the village since his magical powers aren't a match for the Shattered Knights.

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The plot is great but I fail to connect with the characters. No plot development so far and no character personality. All of them are just stiff. The power system here is a bit confusing and I find it hard to picture it or measure it. The setting is very vague and unclear and it is overly fast paced.

I'm very curious about the power system here. It seems there is no way to rate/measure MC's progress.

Let's add some mysterious sounds to it. Dun dun dun!

I love those golden glasses, ilthey help me see my life differently. Lol

I just play with the whole thing and find what works. Thanks for reading, Fair!

The plot is interesting Hough I fail to get any character development or personality. Death seems a little too normal. Grammar errors are a big issue too. I find it difficult knowing which POV his book is written in. World building is not satisfactory. More work needed here.

A good one. Though, I fail to see Rean as a character who had lived wanting nothing. Death's character also seems...strange.

I love Narene's character and I love writing about her.

I give this story 2 star because I find some issues with it. The grammatical errors and the stagnant arcs make the plot appear boring and stuff and pulls readers out. World building has been ignored and the core of writing--character development--has been ignored too. This book needs serious overhaul to push up.