Review Detail of Jo_J in Rise of King Arthur

We are all here to learn and improve our skills and talents. The idea is great! It is something "fresh" on Webnovel. Only with our hard work and termination we are able to develop some standards... No matter what you write about, it is important that the story has, what is most important - the topic (it does not have to be a unique problem that has never been discussed by anyone before), credibility, hero, settings, emotions and the correct language, style, and workshop. So I encourage you to work hard on the text. I am not English speaker, but I see a lot of grammar, interpunctions and stylistic errors. I would suggest that you first make a specific plan of the storyline, decide about the specifics of particular characters and try to follow that. I wish you an inspiration and a lot of great ideas!