Unorthodox_Quill
First... I'M SORRY MY BELOVED READERS WHO READ THE NOVEL ALREADY... I deleted Chapter of two kids. reason- after thinking more I reshaped the ending a bit. Therefore, these two won't be a part in the ending as I planned at the beginning. I'm sure you'll love the new ending more. this isn't my second review, cuz I deleted the first one to replace it by this. I'm re editing the story but I promise I won't make any major changes anymore but, just fix the issues I made as a naive writer when I started the story. The future chapters will be better as I have faithful team backing me up, reading the story before publishing and giving me feedbacks about mistakes escape my sight like repetitions. I specially thank these 'Revenge Officials'(As I name them) for their dedication to give the best story to you guys. I hope you all enjoy reading the story as much as I enjoy writing it. P.S: After editing I'll put a note as re-edited in authors notes so you can separate them. Check my profile and join my server. Join the party! Happy cultivation !
know the author for a while and with the author creativity iam sure she will make this great story novel into masterpiecel furthermore this novel already have a good start [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I usually don't read cultivation stories since one needs to know a lot. But this book was quite different. The author explains the tale beautifully and explains any words new readers wouldn't know. I love how the author loves to interact with the readers. Needless to say, the story caught my attention and my sympathy. I felt drawn to the character's and their lives. The synopsis is short, sweet and to the point. Good work, Author! Wishing you the best in the times to come.