Review Detail of Unorthodox_Quill in Revenge of the half-demon cultivator on his second life.

First... I'M SORRY MY BELOVED READERS WHO READ THE NOVEL ALREADY... I deleted Chapter of two kids. reason- after thinking more I reshaped the ending a bit. Therefore, these two won't be a part in the ending as I planned at the beginning. I'm sure you'll love the new ending more. this isn't my second review, cuz I deleted the first one to replace it by this. I'm re editing the story but I promise I won't make any major changes anymore but, just fix the issues I made as a naive writer when I started the story. The future chapters will be better as I have faithful team backing me up, reading the story before publishing and giving me feedbacks about mistakes escape my sight like repetitions. I specially thank these 'Revenge Officials'(As I name them) for their dedication to give the best story to you guys. I hope you all enjoy reading the story as much as I enjoy writing it. P.S: After editing I'll put a note as re-edited in authors notes so you can separate them. Check my profile and join my server. Join the party! Happy cultivation !