Aoki_Aku
The story is a good time waster. But the characters have no personality. All party members join within a chapter or two of being introduced. There was only one interparty conflict as of ch 75 and it was very early on. None of the characters have backstories. We got maybe a paragraph total for a dozen characters including the MC. The characters are indistinguishable. They are constantly laughing or buying cake. No range of emotions. Just laughing and cake. Furthermore, despite apparently being a monogamous story, the MC only meets women. The battles have no tension and the combat no meaning. At first, the author described careful pulling as they raided dungeons. Now they just say skill drops like the MC used a skip ticket. It's enjoyable anyways as a SOL time waster but the lack of any conflict or character is a fatal flaw.
i have enjoyed this not really any grammer mistakes that were glaringly obvious or annoying. update stability is alright. story development is going well and not really many flaws but between dungeons and in them not much context to it except descibing some fights and interactons not to mention the "romance" ""if you can call it that"" seemed a LITTLE bit too forced to me but meh. mc and others get all these epic+ items, skills and all this loot while is fine for me but it feels weird seeing that every run they get 1-5 epics, skills or legendary items/BP's. the mc is a OP mc wondering what he will get from the gatcha upgrade
very happy with the pace of the book. how things get a explanation in a timely manner. not written out or forgotten about. funny easy read to follow along. lots of literally lol moments. fight seence are not dragged out like dbz cough cough. review at chap 202. wishing hoping and praying for more chaps!
This is a very fun read. The MC is crazy OP and blows through most challenges, but there is still a lot of interesting development, a great cast of characters that support the journey, and plenty of world building and exploration. And a prankster of a god throwing some amusing twists out here and there.
I would recommend if you just wanna pass you're time. . Sure it's easy to read and it's chill, but. . There's hardly any world building -minimal character developmen -most plots feels forced -"game system" was hardly explained as if it's a common knowledge, even the mc doesn't know some basic system function. -scene keeps jumping from one place to another without transition -so many plot holes - there aren't really much challenge Just my opinion but it feels kinda boring. . For those who will try to read the novel, i hope you enjoy your time.
this story is well worth your time if your looking for a unique slice of life novel, with a interesting mc who's going to cause all sorts of small playful chaos. with many supporting characters and personalities it's hard not to spoil what you will find here, if your looking for a harem tho you won't find it here. the system is well thought out and only a few things kinda get lost as the story goes on, and the story gets better for it as it becomes more free flowing and less stiff with huge paragraphs of stats and skills. if you have the time and some coins or free passes to spend this novel is well worth your attention to help give you a good laugh or two and maybe lighten up your day. it's definitely worth the time.
The story seems interesting so far, down side is that the world building is poor, fights are over quickly (monster, pow, dead). Biggest gripe is the constant confusion between past and present tense in sentences which causes me personally to reconstruct each chapter into the correct tense in my head. I don't get paid for this and it's too much hassle for a constant effort when I just want to relax and read.