The story seems interesting so far, down side is that the world building is poor, fights are over quickly (monster, pow, dead). Biggest gripe is the constant confusion between past and present tense in sentences which causes me personally to reconstruct each chapter into the correct tense in my head. I don't get paid for this and it's too much hassle for a constant effort when I just want to relax and read.
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