ExChaser
One of the funniest novels I've looked at in a while, and it's a pretty interesting take on a saturated genre. I love the comedy, I just like to imagine walking into this guy's house and seeing hundreds of dakimakuras lining the wall. There are some grammer mistakes, but the writing more than makes up for that
The idea is pretty good, and time skips are normal and fine. However, some characters actions do not match with their role. Maybe try and link character background with their morals in you mind before using them. This would prevent such contradictions. Also, some random skips from first to third person and back, but nothing to serious. Overall a good novel. Keep up the good work author
First thing first, I stopped reading at chap18 so I don't know how thing go beyond that. The story is interesting, whith the charactere reincarnated as a ring and the MC get dragged left and right. While the writing isn't that bad, it's not good either but you can understand the story without issues. The world background has yet to be developped (maybe later? I stopped reading quite early) And finally, the charactere are rushed? (English is not my mother tongue so sometine, I lack vocabulary). A exemple, the MC get attached to it's first owner for no reason. Some people get introduced then leave without much impact... All in all, a good concept whitout major flaw but the minor ones get me off. If you're the type that continue don't unhook off easily at minor things, I'm sure you'll enjoy it.
The story line is so interesting and unexpected. I really into the story. Moreover, I hope that the new chapter will be released soon. I want to know more about the main character and what will happen to him. If you are looking for an unexpected story, this book is the best way to kill the time. 😻 thanks, author keep it going. 💯