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I like a good goblin story and a FanFic with understandable spelling and grammar. If someone puts in effort for me to read I will respect that. But I won't if its halfassed.
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K_Log3dCommentedVisibly more difficult after getting rocked twice but that's fine. I'll allow it.
Gengyo wanted to roar from the frustration he felt, but now ever single pair of eyes were on him, waiting for the next command. He struggled to calm himself, letting its brain do what it was good at.- K_Log3dCommented
Level of Morale High. Level of Stupid, also High.
He pulled back on the arm of the head guard who was attempting to leave, and returned his headbutt, injuring himself on the hard kabuto helmet as he did so. - K_Log3dCommented
My name... is SOLDIER.
"AWOO!" - K_Log8dCommented
in the words of Bricky, *Ahem!* 'Not Black people black but a line at a white castle at midnight black.'
Galeron had been immensely relieved when he discovered that he was only some monstrous Hagraven freak on the inside but not on the outside. His little sister seemed to be more or less the same as him, only female. They both were a bit larger than your average baby or child. Galeron was just below four feet. They both had dark grey almost black skin and bright crimson colored eyes that seemed to glow with power. Their hair was white as snow and they both had slightly overgrown canines. Nothing as notable as an Orc but still noticeable, if they were to smile or reveal their teeth in some other fashion. In Galeron's eyes, their canines had a very Vampire-like vibe to them. Galeron also noticed that his skin seemed to grow ever darker as he grew older. He suspected that, by the time he reached adulthood, he would probably be the blackest person on Nirn.detailReincarnated into Elder Scrolls Universe: Daedric Prince of UndeathVideo Games · ChaosSlimeGod - K_Log8dCommented
🤣🤣🤣 Go go Gadget is one old school saying. I'm surprised anyone still remembers that catchphrase.
'Awww, shit! She's back! Dammit, did she see me practicing magic?' Galeron exclaimed inside his head. 'Do babies have poker faces? If they do I could really use one right about now. Equip Poker Face! Go, go, gadget Poker Face! Poker Face Power Activate! Kenny Rodgers, I choose you! Use The Gambler! Dammit, it's not very effective! She's still coming!'detailReincarnated into Elder Scrolls Universe: Daedric Prince of UndeathVideo Games · ChaosSlimeGod - K_Log19dReplied to Taitiruk
I think it's because this is a different timeline/alternative universe. some things aren't the same I believe.
Kuchiki Sōjun's face was as calm and expressionless. - K_Log25dCommented"Whatever will be, will be!"
- K_Log29dCommented
So basically, he's Alex Mercer from Prototype.
He touched the 'fabric' of the clothe and felt it was smooth but also rough, it was a weird feeling. He touched his pants and shoes and they felt the same. He was obviously weirded out by the same sensations he felt from the clothes. Like it was a part of him instead of them being separate. They still act like normal clothes, as in, they still shift when moving different parts of the body. - K_Log1mthPosted
Well, let's start with the good. 40K fanfic. That's rare. Freshly updated. It's even rarer. Setting, well thought out. Now, onto the obvious bad. Atrocious grammar. Massive influx of run-on sentences. If the author isn't a native speaker/writer of English, this will be difficult to overcome, but it is possible to improve (the writing quality). Also possible to get an editor or that is not a viable option, the author can always rely on Grammarly. I am currently on chapter 6. The previous and current chapters by far have had the most need of re-writing and heavy editing. It is an interesting story overall, though. I hope for the author's success in creating a wonderful story. Keep up the hard work.
- K_Log1mthCommented
Am I the only one weirded out that 2 Ten year Olds just did the deed? If so there really is no hope for humanity.
He woke up the next morning with a naked Viviane in his arms. He couldn't help but recall what happened last night. They were called to a graduation party by her friends and got somewhat drunk causing them to have sex due to their hormones acting up. He didn't move and stayed completely still trying to not wake her up. - K_Log1mthCommented
Same here:"Knees weak,Arms are heavy-"
My heart began pounding harder and faster in my chest. My arms were clammy, and sweat raced down my temples. My wound proved ineffective when it came to slowing me down. Still, there was one thing that came to my mind at that moment. - K_Log1mthCommented"Ouch!" Gamera woke up because something hit him. Before he could raise his head, something fell on his head again. "Who dared?" He thought indignantly. Canisters with new waste were constantly falling on him. "Wait a second and I'll get to you." With slight irritation and some inexplicable joy, Gamera began to rise to the surface.
- K_Log1mthReplied to proganerx_Dave
After coming this far into the story, I finally give. Let the bad English continue.
The journey to the ocean took half a day. The constant ascents and descents of the mountains were not good for the health of the injured, poor turtle. Sometimes he just sat in the gorge and tasted the rainforest. He was bored, so he found a new game in eating fruit trees that he had never seen before. Unfortunately, he did not taste the fruit. They were too small for him. Obviously, he, without realizing it, was eating stress. - K_Log1mthReplied to CobraQuantum
Same
A strong flame shot out of my mouth, engulfing everything in front of me. It spilled red onto my hands and onto the Kaiju's face, and continued down his body. The water of the bay behind him began to boil and evaporate. Screams and screeches could be heard alongside the noise of flames, as if from a jet engine. Smoke and the smell of burning filled the air. I didn't stop! I intended to express everything I had: all my anger and fear, all the frustration and confusion that had been building up inside me since I came into this world. - K_Log1mthCommented
only time will tell if it's Judas or not.
Slash Baron looked to the woman at his side, ""So, what has he been doing outside the Ring… Sango?" - K_Log1mthCommented
Sub to Goosiest to be the best sim drifter and remember boiz, stay sideways. PEACE!
This Goose demands MORE Reviews, HAHAHAH! - K_Log1mthCommentedPoor Pyromancers...
- K_Log1mthCommentedThe yellow blasters did not stop firing at the body, which did not harm me at all, and flying forward again, I turned into a white flash that did not stop this time. Rushing destroying everything in the way, I felt my heartbeat and my hands itch. Flying into the hull of the ship, I immediately flew out from the other side and, making a U-turn, immediately pierced the ship, repeating this many times until only parts flying in all directions remained from the ship.
- K_Log1mthCommented
I'm with Melitia_Snek...who is player?
"I wish the player was here…" – thinking to myself, I plunged into thought.