Reviews of Reborn in Naruto As Madara's Grandson

dropped because of nerf, i mean if you don't want op mc then don't make it op from the start, adding nerfs will just ruin the story. The story is ruined, hope you like it I really stole the review, I'm too lazy to write.

I found the idea of ​​this fanfic very interesting, really, I really want to keep reading this but it seems that the author tries his best to make me quit, my god he seems to snort a little cocaine whenever he goes to give an explanation of how a skill works or whenever it organizes the events that will make the story move on, I'll keep reading but please, author take it easy on me 😭 stop writing things that don't make any sense.

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I really wish the MC met with madara and just like out right star wars the thing but just more reversed. I mean how would you react when you didn't even know you had a grandson and he is against you.

I liked your story before 40 chapter. I hope you read "Blood bag" or other good naruto fanfic in fanfiction. it will give you more idea . one thing you mess up most is power level. best of luck. I hope in your next new novel you would fix it.

I keep getting spammed by bots advertising this story. I see that there are no other comments calling this out, so I can only assume the author is deleting them. If my review gets deleted ill just leave another, so on so on. Your behavior is predatory. It’s also illegal.

/!\ This is a fan fiction BASED ON Naruto World but not ABOUT the serie. /! \ The author had also warned the reader to read this fiction with open mindset. Of which I agree. The story is currently under editing. Thus a review Cannot be made objectively. Despite this, the story is quite good. The negative aspects are that a lot of details (in world building) hurt a little bit for Naruto fans. And more importantly. /! \ All comments are really offensive. A lot of paragraphs comments should be removed for the sanity of readers and more so for the Author. The author put a lot of work into his story only to be diced by abusive comments. So please read the comments at your own risk. Overall this is a good story.

I really like this story. there is nothing much to say. I like the creativity and it's slow pace is perfect for my taste. I have no intention of criticizing this as others have done plenty of that.

I gotta be honest this is unbearable to read . the mc is smart yet dumb, plot progressions is too forced, alpha at the same time beta. this just feels too conflicting which is the sign for a lazy writing. since mc personality always change for the plot progressions.

Absolute trash, despite being so far in the story canon still hasn’t changed a single bit, that’s actually crazy you know? I have doubts the story might still be in canon in the 600’s chapters! To make matters even worse, despite the protagonist literally being one of, if not THE strongest person around, HE IS STILL USELESS! Literally nothing he does ever matters, canon still happens, nothing changes, what’s the point of even reading any further? The main character himself is basically filler. Even his medical background has no place in the story! It literally doesn’t add any substance whatsoever, hes basically just another average Joe off the street, adding “medical student” in the synopsis was just another clickbait smh. This story is useless, it’s basically a more boring version of Naruto. What a waste of time.

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Very good character development and suggest you all to read it was a nice time reading itVery good character development and suggest you all to read it was a nice time reading itVery

I'm just now getting into reading this book and I gotta say... it's good. So far the story development is fantastic, the character development is amazing, it has some slight variation to the anime/manga, but thats what makes it unique. I like this book very much. easily one of the best books I've read so far. I would recommend it to anybody looking for a good Naruto fan-fic to read. P.S. Only reason didn't get full 5 stars on everything is because I am just now picking up the book and don't know how often the author posts, if he does anymore. So I rated "Update frequency" in the middle.

I really like this story, thank you for writing it, I wish you the best in the future and hope that this pandemic doesn't make us give up. By Borneo fan💚

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Kinda weird how the author made him madara’s grandson even thought he’s in shusuis generation, considering that tsunade is hashirama’s grand daughter and she’s an ***** in the series already and Madara had to leave the village pretty you so he definitely wouldn’t have a grandson in the third hokages era, probably before the second war would be when he would have a grandson. I would also like to say that the plot of his parents instantly dying and it being danzo’s fault doesn’t add anything to the story since he would already have to deal with danzo because of his hate of the uchiha, in fact it would have been better to make them a positive driving force to give him purpose. The author also didn’t do any decent world building like it would have been cool to put the character in an era where there wasn’t too much preset data about and created his own parallel universe of Naruto but instead, it feels like he just leaches of the original Naruto story without adding on to it and then just polluting it.

Please can someone tell me if Izuna the MC returns to be the protagonist after his "death" if so, in which chapter does he return?

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