Reviews of Prime Originator

it got action, adventure, romance, and many other elements that I just love in stories that I read. great plot line and character development.

I really enjoyed reading this novel. I hope you can come back to it once wsa is over. I haven’t read your new novel so I can’t say which one is better. I just hope that you don’t completely drop this one. If you do, mark it as complete so I can read the last chapters without wasting my money on privilege

its just awesome hope author won't drop it and continues the novel because I just love it ☺️☺️☺️☺️$-$+-$+$_+_+_--+$+-$-_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_+_++_+

It has been atleast two months since I started to read this novel, but I have not gone far.I true to power throught but the corruption of the cringe has rattled my bones and burned my flesh like hellfire.It has been a long and arduos journey as I can no longer can withstand such torment....May you bring glory to the God Emperor by conquast and death

I don't understand how this novel has so few views. I think it's very good. Perhaps the level system is quite confusing, along with the somewhat generic story and cliches, but regardless, it's a great story to read and pass the time. Please dont give up!

A really good and entertaining story. The characters are well fleshed out and feel more or less like real people and the world they live in is an interesting place to explore. The story itself is very entertaining and well paced. I would definitely recommend others give this a try.

This story has a lot of potentials. But what i can't understand is, the MC. He experience the cruel world of cultivation, he and his father was even killed. In this new life of his, he said he is going to low-key. Well, at first he very low-key while accumulating his strength, that was a very good thing, for me. But at later chapters his action is not low-key anymore and his strength was stuck at 5th step. And now he already trigger the "Legendary" scene of typical xianxia novel where the MC hunted by more powerful enemy while beinbeing stuck at lower realm of power. Hayssss, I stopped reading those novel because of how stupid the MC, how stupid the plot, and how repeatative the scene, where the MC killed guard and then the young master will get revenge beacuse of the "humilition" and the he would kill the young master and the young master big brother will get revenge, and the cycle will repeat all the to the distant ancestor. I hate those stupid plots the most. I hope that this novel was not like those xianxia novels.

Why is the entire start of the novel just a bunch of exposition Completely and utterly unreadable Imagine if an actual novel like lord of the rings just dumped all of its lore at the start of the novel. no one would ever read it

not a very bad story. Although full of cliches, it does get better sometimes. my only advice might be to decrease the amount of harem members?

this novel is actually one of the best ones I have read so far. MC has a great character build while his harem is also 👌🏽. A great plot story and its not repetitive.

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Ch 200 or something like that, his parents have disappeared for Hella long and he was just like they will pop up later. can some explain this. even the guards mysteriously don't remember. Did I miss something

too many cliches and the story have very slow progress, stretch too much too many random things out of nowhere that ain't even needed, some chapters can be explained in 1 chapter or 2 but end up in more than 5 chapters

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idk man I'm @ 4 chaps and the damsel in distress trope is here already -_- will the story get better afterwards? ch4 is such a turn off for me

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Currently searching for my next novel to read and stumble upon this. After close to 20chapters I think I'm searching for something else. The start is really confusing (fortunately gets cleared up quite fast) as well as the technological timeline of the world. But the main issue why I'm not gonna continue reading this is because it's just one mainstream cliche stacked upon another. - Powerful Reincarnator - Friendly fatty - Heaven defying cultivation method - orphan - actually the lost/missing son of the king - saves the beauty who's about to get raped, which then falls in love - gets offered to marry the granddaughter of some old dude he gave a pill. And that's just out of the 1st dozen or so chapters.

Oh man how should I put this, everything from writing quality to the power scaling and stuff like character chart and pacing of the story is excellent. my only problem is with the protagonist himself, he's supposed to be a Divine level cultivator who has comprehended laws but I don't see no signs of maturity or wisdom in his nature. He loses control quickly, is submissive, has 0 control over his actions when he's under the influence of his emotions and lastly he has this aura around him from his previous life which screams pampered and raised in a greenhouse.

The setting it's pretty unique, shame that's fleshed out in such a mediocre way. A lot of the times I have to make a conscious effort to remember thst people use weapons, are going through the industrial revolution, are in a kingdom and that they're fighting beasts. Again, I like this setting, but the author doesn't do a good job at showing it to us, the readers. The plot is... Mediocre at best. You always know what's going to happen and there's mistery and some plot points that are interesting, the problem is that the execution is heavily influenced by wuxia clichés so mistery turns into confusion The characters are okay. I guess. Some of them are likeable, must of them are pretty one dimensional. The MC has this pretty interesting conflict going on with his two souls, or something like that, what a shame that it wasn't higher in the list of priorities for the author. Oh and I stopped reading by 120. If you decide to continue on, I hope it gets better. Ps How in the world did his parents and sister dissapear and the MC didn't give a single f?