This story has a lot of potentials. But what i can't understand is, the MC. He experience the cruel world of cultivation, he and his father was even killed. In this new life of his, he said he is going to low-key. Well, at first he very low-key while accumulating his strength, that was a very good thing, for me. But at later chapters his action is not low-key anymore and his strength was stuck at 5th step. And now he already trigger the "Legendary" scene of typical xianxia novel where the MC hunted by more powerful enemy while beinbeing stuck at lower realm of power. Hayssss, I stopped reading those novel because of how stupid the MC, how stupid the plot, and how repeatative the scene, where the MC killed guard and then the young master will get revenge beacuse of the "humilition" and the he would kill the young master and the young master big brother will get revenge, and the cycle will repeat all the to the distant ancestor. I hate those stupid plots the most. I hope that this novel was not like those xianxia novels.
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LIKEThe early chapters are messy and filled with cliches and cringe momentsđ Writing had been one big learning curve for me, so if you make it through the early chapters, you will see my improvement and where the story pulls away from the normsđ I honestly didnât expect to receive so much support from my readers despite my amateur start to writing, but after 4yrs of writing, I can confidently say world building and character development are the strong points of this storyđ