Reviews of Persona: Hero x Villain System

I liked it it was vary vary refreshing I would like to to read more the whole hero villain thing is awesome keep it up 😍 It reminds me of the arrow with steet wise smarts unlike the arrow show were it's got it's Rich boy bules type

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Hello, Unfortunately I see signs of Hiatus. I have no doubt that this quite interesting Fan-fic is going to be ( has been ) dropped. Enjoy reading those few chaps and then go cry.

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it's a pretty good read with interesting premise. The author does need to work on his grammar and get an editor or proofreader, some paragraphs look as if lines were skipped, it also gets confusing to tell who's talking.

tem muito potencial contanto que o autor não abandone tem uma boa chance de estar no topo desse site. Claro se o autor conseguir equilibrar o protagonista o bastante pra ele não ser considerado hipocrita, que geralmente é o erro mais comum em fanfics com karma bom e karma ruim.

I quite linked these first 5 chapters. I'm sorry to see that it's been a month since the last update. The story has potential, its fluently written and reads naturally. I recommend the author to continue the story.

This is one of the best Marvel fanfic I have ever read most of them are just painful to read the concept is great and unique just a few grammar problems.

one of the best novel I have read so far. hope you will update the chapters in future . love your work ......[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

love it. are you going to make new chapters or should I stop waiting?

A well-prepared backstory and a great character sketch. I hope you don't drop this fan-fiction author. It's a good read and has a great origin story. Thank you for sharing this amazing fan-fiction with us.

It is good novel i liked it pls never drop Good luck😀😀😀👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

in short here is my review and first it was good but later it got annoying and ridiculous

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This is well written, and enjoyable at times. But I feel like the main character just stumbles around at time. He also seems to go out of his way to get involved with things he doesn’t need to get involved with. I like the fact that he has plans, but then he’ll make a decision that kind of throw a lot of plants out of the window. This is a good story, if you like the marvel comics universe more than the cinematic. It does have in a lot of different characters that we normally don’t read in fanfic. I think if you enjoy a good character, who’s aligned more towards good and being a heroes than this is a story you would like. If you’re like me, and want someone who doesn’t care about others only focuses on his goals. This story may at times frustrate you.

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"No hay fuerza en la carne, solo debilidad". "No hay constancia en la carne, solo decadencia". "No hay certeza en la carne sino en la muerte"

Pretty good but the events in the story are a little slow and somtimes too fast.

The story is really good nothing bad to say and consistent updates the story progress is fantastic and I'm eating this story up.

Honestly so I like what happening the story the character and more tho few things I had a problem with that slow Persona but overall it's great 👍