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Feebling3hCommentedHey disappointing may be but at least you have it a sort of ending. Thanks for effort you put into the story
Well, surprisingly, I am not dead, lol. First of all, let me clarify this: yes, this fanfiction is finished. I am sure the ending has left many people disappointed, knowing how it could be extended further into the exploration of the Abyss of Nothingness and so on. But hear me out, I am so done. I tried, believe me, but it's like my mind has decided to shut itself down the moment I think about what to write further on this story. It's not that I have hit a roadblock, but more like I made Yun Che so strong that he can solve pretty much everything else with a thought alone; I suck at writing slice-of-life stories after all. Either way, I highly appreciate the support of all the people who supported this fanfiction. Also, forgive me if I left you disappointed with this ending.- Feebling4hCommented"So predictable. It's good that they are finally making the move. I was getting bored otherwise," Yun Che chuckled and held Xuanyin's soft boneless hand, gently kissing it.
- Feebling12hReplied to Ragnall_the_dark
Pointing out stupid mistakes like mispelling something seems like bullying authors...a lot of them can't handle critique and corrections
Due to that, she also gained a very strong impression of her savior, Ray. He at first introduced himself as a talking black cat. Then god and finally her adoptive father. To say she loved Ray is an understatement. She adored her the most, he is her savior. The light that appears in the darkest hour of her life, a hand that extends to her and pulls her out from that dark time and turns her life around from miserable to a very blessed one. - Feebling14hCommented
...yet again bipolar MC moments....
After 3 months, Kurou killed them while broadcasting live on the Internet, after torturing them for more than a month in more than one way and even making several homosexuals rape them. - Feebling14hCommented
Wind seed is something heretic god made for the successor of his profound veins. It didnt exist before he made the legacy.
[Description: The Cloud Step Technique is the best movement technique in the Anti-God universe and was invented by the White Tiger who wanted to outdo the Heretic God with something since he couldn't compete with him in controlling the wind element due to the Wind Seed. - Feebling14hCommented
He refused to fight back to kill and now talks garbage? Author....your MC makes no sense
"The bastard from Xiao Sect and his damned servants, wait." Yu Tian gritted his teeth angrily as he took the Healing pills. - Feebling1dReplied to P_J_Sch
There was at least one more mistake before this paragraph. Why don't you correct everything
Due to that, she also gained a very strong impression of her savior, Ray. He at first introduced himself as a talking black cat. Then god and finally her adoptive father. To say she loved Ray is an understatement. She adored her the most, he is her savior. The light that appears in the darkest hour of her life, a hand that extends to her and pulls her out from that dark time and turns her life around from miserable to a very blessed one. - Feebling1dReplied to Teaalk
Correct. They are 'buddies'
"You can guess where he went right? He better not fails cause if he does than he'll learn for sure what disobeying a hokage results in!" - Feebling1dCommented
Why isnt Asia mentioned? This Is an Asia moment
Just a glance is enough to make her body recall the pleasure carved to her flesh by the torture done by Zouken on her body. She knew she is a dirty girl and she will never be pure like Sirin and Abby. But other than carnal pleasure, there is another joy that she seek more from Ray. - Feebling2dCommented''Tell me, do you like children?'' Carol asked.
- Feebling3dCommented
This story was already posted here once. Now that i see the same mistake I'm fairly certain that this guy just copy-pasted the other version. It was btw incomplete
Xiao Xun'er's personal guards were high-level Dou Emperors, and in the Gama Empire, no one could threaten her life. - Feebling4dCommentedThere, amid the screaming crowd and blaring car horns stood Tyson. The muscular teen seemed small and vulnerable compared to the hulking reptilian behemoth lumbering before him. Tyson was still clad in the skintight black spandex from earlier, but now a white mask was strapped over the upper half of his face, concealing his identity. Where had that come from? Natasha filed away that detail for later. The more pressing question was what exactly the teen planned to do against this prehistoric monster.
- Feebling4dCommented
This is weird....There are scenes from all of the movies. So which Aunt May is there? The old one or the Middle aged one?
"Hey, Parker! Give it here!" Flash demanded, strutting towards Peter with an outstretched hand, expecting the nerd's compliance. - Feebling4dCommented
Could be hologram too...
Agent Coulson nodded in agreement, "So, we're dealing with an enhanced individual. Someone who can not only change their appearance but also their physical build. Or at least, the perception of their appearance." - Feebling4dCommented
Can he absorb essence of super spiders?
But deep down, he knew it wouldn't be enough. What bank had the kind of money he needed? He needed a bigger score, something substantial, something that would be enough for a long time. That's when the thought of Oscorp entered his mind. If he was going to cross a line, it should be worth it. Oscorp was a giant conglomerate with secrets and military prototypes. But what could he take that would be valuable? He needed something he could sell. Who would he even sell a prototype or some groundbreaking tech that hadn't been released yet? A rival company or a foreign country? With his ability to jump in and out of places, Tyson could potentially infiltrate Oscorp, find something of worth, and disappear before anyone realized what had happened. - Feebling4dCommented
Shouldnt there be an issue with weight distribution? The dude has bones made of metal and is 6'6 tall....even if he has normal bones, as a dude with mutant physique they were probably denser already...he must have weighted like 300 pounds at least...add the new metal skeleton....I dont know. The plane is also very small which makes weight distribution all the more important
The vibration from the plane's engines grew stronger, and the two felt the push against their seats as the aircraft accelerated. As the plane lifted off the ground, the world outside the windows became smaller. - Feebling4dCommented
nevermind
Tyson, still caught in the warmth of their closeness, let out a heartfelt laugh that rumbled through his chest and filled the room with its vibrant timbre. His eyes, gleaming with mirth, met hers. "I couldn't help myself," he confessed with a sheepish grin, the laughter in his voice making his words dance. - Feebling5dReplied to McGryffin
- Feebling5dReplied to IanzskI
rub one out on/in her
"Well, he can alwasy ru-" - Feebling6dCommented
So basically "please let me waste your materials "
"I mean, what if I become your employee?" Hermione elaborated, her voice growing softer as she continued, "I still have a lot to learn about potion-making, and I'm free during the holidays, so why not have some company?"