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ProfessorofCulture
ProfessorofCultureLv149mthProfessorofCulture

it's a pretty good read with interesting premise. The author does need to work on his grammar and get an editor or proofreader, some paragraphs look as if lines were skipped, it also gets confusing to tell who's talking.

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Thanks for the review and constructive criticism. I'm not the greatest in the grammar area, but it'll improve, I'm sure, as I continue writing.