Reviews of Percy Jackson and the Hard-Working Mortal
Percy Jackson and the Hard-Working Mortal
NoHaremPlease
- Overall Rate
- Writing Quality
- Updating Stability
- Story Development
- Character Design
- world background
bit.ly/3LyRF1N ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
I'm waiting for you on the app's discussion channel!
Download the app to discuss your favorite works, TV shows, and even the weather with me!
Im really excited so please dont drop this at least for a few hundred chapters π and I feel like you can slow things down if only a little i feel like you are running throught the story a little fast unless you already plan to change or add to the story in ways that will help further the character development. it would also be interesting if you would spend more time writing about the fights or put in some more details who doesnt like some blood and violenceππ but over all thanks for such a good read and i hope you keep it up
This book is overall fine. But there are key things that just making reading this a pain. 1. Don't use (...) every single sentence. Nobody does that, and for a reason. Its ugly to look at, and gives a lethargic feeling for the experience. Use it very, very rarely, or none at all. 2. The character reactions, motivations, etc... could use some work. He is lackluster. You don't have to make him mighty, just interesting. The rest can follow this.
What more can be said, That has already been? I is a good story, the speed is good but could be slowed down at certain parts. Other than that, itβs one of the few good PJOβs out there. It is not one of those overpowered or βsmartβ Percy fanfics. I believe you perfectly recreated Percyβs personality like uncle Rick intended it to be. And the main character is balanced the way where it would not destroy plot on a whim. You truly are one in the countless thousands to do it right.
[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
