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Reviews of One Piece: Path to Power

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One Piece: Path to Power

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Paradox_
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My honest review (still biased). Naturally, with respect to fanfictions, I'd round it to 4/5. It is a different timeline than most One Piece fanfics with a more driven MC, lest he is swept away by the turbulent seas. The recently posted chapters are a rewrite, thus ANY review before this one is outdated and inaccurate. I suggest reading the first arc, chapters 1-11, to get a taste of the story and whether it is for you. Check out the Disclaimers chapter for more information. Thanks for stopping by.

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Melshan
MelshanLv7Melshan

more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more moremore more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more Waifu Boa Hancock

Harvez
HarvezLv1Harvez

The best fan fiction on van peace that I have read in my life. I won't say anything about grammar, since I read with the help of a translator, which makes it almost impossible to notice mistakes, but the writing style is very pleasant to the eye. The character of the characters is very natural and there is no feeling that the author has changed them for the sake of his plot. The very infusion of MC into the plot also feels natural, which is very good. The beginning may seem cringe, as well as the actions of the main character in the first chapters may cause some to discard this fan fiction, but then the author has greatly improved. The battle scenes are written beautifully, the improvement of the main character's strength is consistent and fast, but it does not go beyond the OP. Romance also pleases, although the author constantly writes that such scenes are not given to him, for me they look very nice.

Dave_Guest
Dave_GuestLv14Dave_Guest

A really good start for a fanfic. Nice devil fruit. Good Talent. I hope the System wont dictate his life, because the strength of the people in One Piece fluctuate very much. And I hope his cheats wont become too rediculous. I like the curse release and a bloodline. I hope he works hard for his power.

SOSboa
SOSboaLv2SOSboa

Dope, sincerely I hope it's not dropped like every promising one piece fic. By the way, for those considering dropping the story because of the system at the start being a bit much, don't it gets better, a lot better. The greatest thing about this fic is when it's set, rocks pirate era is so interesting and something I've never seen explored. Forget all those joining the strawhats fics I need more rocks fanfics.

Donflamingo1304
Donflamingo1304Lv12Donflamingo1304

The best onde piece fic [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

TianGuez
TianGuezLv2TianGuez

Reveal spoiler

nacht
nachtLv13nacht

i am tired reading cliche of mc parents died, i thought this story will be different since author said that he hated weak mc parents but it seems it's my misunderstanding what the author mean.

MChabb
MChabbLv2MChabb

I really love this story. It is one of the rare novel/fanfic that I'm always impatient to read the rest. Can't wait to see where it's going to go. Pls never drop this piece of art, author-sama. SUBARASHI!!!

The_Tube
The_TubeLv5The_Tube

Reveal spoiler

sari_saarinen
sari_saarinenLv3sari_saarinen

asking if its harem and will he get devil fruit and if gets which prefered and does he go around playing hero or is he luffys underling i need info so i dont waste time not prefered

UchihaZenn
UchihaZennLv5UchihaZenn

This is the best one piece fanfic I've ever read, haha ​​I'm tired of readers who always say harsh words or negative words and many are due to their comments, many fanfics that I like are dropped. I hope they understand the many writers who earn nothing just to entertain readers to the point of racking their brains to write a good chapter. Just because of the genre or nature of mc's characters many flock to encourage other readers to pressure the author because they don't like the content of the story, please man if you don't like it don't read it and if you want a fanfic story according to your thoughts write your own fanfic and see the reactions of the people readers who read your writing so that you feel the feelings of the writers when you comment negatively. (By google translate)

Austin_5620
Austin_5620Lv11Austin_5620

this is my favorite one piece fanfiction. LMAO99 and DaoOfEternity are lying thiefs DaoOfEternity is really impressive being able to type while in a coma while the huge idiot LMAO99 has by paradox😂 on the cover of his "amazing" and "original" fanfic.

The_Tube
The_TubeLv5The_Tube

I CAME FROM YOUR OTHER BOOK AND WHEN I SAW THIS ONE I IMMEDIATELY ADDED TO MY LIBRARY AND READ IT!!! THE STORY BACKGROUND IS ALSO REALLY INTERESTING!!! HOPE THIS TURNS OUT TO BE A SUCCESS!!! AND CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE CHAPTERS!!! IF YOU CAN PLIZZZ UPDATE REGULARY OR FREQUENTLY!!!

Vahvel
VahvelLv3Vahvel

One of, if not THE best One Piece fanfic I have had the pleasure to read. The idea and timeline setting at the start of the novel is new and interesting, the characters are well fleshed out, the devil fruit is interesting and the story progression and pacing is good and well thought out. The grammar is good, and I rarely notice any mistakes. Also has a good update schedule. I have no other words than that it's an amazing story. If you enjoy the One Piece world then this is a must read. 5/5.

Humbuub
HumbuubLv4Humbuub

A sapient System ain't just for me anymore. Also the Quest is really stupid. IDKW this have such high ratings.

The_Crimson_Abyss
The_Crimson_AbyssLv4The_Crimson_Abyss

This has been one of the best One piece FF. However to my immeasurable disappointment it is being stolen by vulgar theif like DaoOfEternity.

DollShururu
DollShururuLv12DollShururu

The early chapters is just too disgusting to read, i can't bear to read the pov of a dramatic chunni guy I'm cringing so bad. I read that this is going to be rewritten, will it really happen?

emoshoke_sebastine
emoshoke_sebastineLv4emoshoke_sebastine

if you need help paradox, I can offer my services. I can help you edit and proof read for free. I'm a fan of your book and I want to make the process for the rework, much quicker

AsDarkAsBlack
AsDarkAsBlackLv4AsDarkAsBlack

Trash leech from DaoOfEternity __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________