ohh, I think his luck is like Bennet from genshin Impact. He wanted to die but was unable to die because his luck was so rotten that fate didn't want to release him from suffering.

previous chapter : "Brother help," mc said.

not consistent translation, but it's decent, and I've read worse. kind of lacking in interaction between characters, but for fanfic, it's fine, I think. it's still early, I'm hopping in the future chapter that this fanfic improve, but I kind of doubt it.

not fully adopt*

imo, it's kind of annoying tbh. I understand what you mean, but if in the future mc will face people like this, imo it's better to be feared so people like this won't bother mc anymore. this is just my rant, so don't take it too seriously.

kujou clan :

I'm going

author, there's a thing that I want asking something about kujou clan head. In canon genshin lore, if I'm not mistaken, kujou clan head after got defeated only got house arrest and early aging as a punishment for what he did and what his clan did, for other clan Idk what happened to them. so what I want to ask is, will you follow something similar to the genshin canon or not? please, if not, can you make the punishment worse for him and kujou clan, maybe like make kujou clan head become a vegetative state by locking his soul.

Isn't keqing don't want to get a vision but still get it? what prevents mc will not get granted a vision? do you mean that in the future mc is probably getting a vision and will not use it because he knows what vision is?

I'm not an author or writer, but if I'm reading a novel or fanfic, I prefer words per chapter around 2k to 5k words. if less than 2k feels like reading a filler even with a rapid chapter update and if longer than 5k, it might affect the release rate because the author took too long to write each chapter.

poor quality fanfic because this fanfic is filled with rushed plot, lack of character interaction between each other, lack of world building, and translation quality of a google translate. it's readable and there's no infuriating thing like r word, ntr, and etc, as far as what chapter I'm currently reading. Only read this fanfic if you don't have anything to read.

I think it's a fine number of soldiers for an army that only fills the army with elite soldiers.

I just can't continue to read past chapter 2 because this fanfic is infuriated me, especially mc character that acts like gojo from jjk but weak asf and pretends himself like a chosen one.

it's good fanfic, but sometimes the author adds unnecessary drama because of that it's kinda painful for me to read this fanfic who doesn't like drama when reading a story.