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  • sari_saarinen
    sari_saarinen5d
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    Jake, Flash's friend, who was there with him, kicking the shit out of me that day, this guy... Oh, God. He's strapped on the bed on his stomach and a granny in a black latex suit, whipping him with a belt and she's got a strapon around her waist. Freaking hell! He acts all tough and this... Eeeww! I jumped down in disgust as the granny began to lube that strapon. I don't even want to think what's gonna happen next. I don't want to get scarred for life. One scar was enough for a lifetime.
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    Spider-Man 0X
    Anime & Comics · Xcalibur_Xc
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  • sari_saarinen
    sari_saarinen6d
    Replied to KnightInArmor

    lord of mysteries, destined villain, reverend insanity,warlock of magus world

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    I Am The Game's Villain
    Fantasy · NihilRuler
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  • sari_saarinen
    sari_saarinen6d
    Replied to KnightInArmor

    why would someone torture themselfes with 150chapters when theres better novels

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    I Am The Game's Villain
    Fantasy · NihilRuler
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  • sari_saarinen
    sari_saarinen7d
    Replied to Lillith1234

    whre can i read orginal

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    +++++++++++++++
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  • sari_saarinen
    sari_saarinen8d
    Replied to Gilgamesh_Official

    it was good chapter i liked how he realized that its now his new life ,reality and he has to take things serosly now

    Please be respectful while commenting in the latest chapter. I have been trying to work my way around the fact that I have absolutly zero experience in writting a story, and so I am aware I am making many mistakes your's and mine's favourite story writters wouldn't do. I am having dificulties regarding the persona of my main character, integrating Gilgamesh mannerisms and all of that while making it believeble, but its stressing me out on how hard it actually is. The last chapter I posted is supposed to be a catalyst for me to be able to make the main character more likeable and to make it possible to change is mind a bit without rewritten the whole damn beginning as many want it. But if I should rewritte the beginning it would feel as if everything I accomplished until now was in vain, so please give well thought criticism in the last chapter and tell me your opinions in a manner which I can use to adapt and better anything I need in this story.
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    Reborn As Gilgamesh In Marvel
    Anime & Comics · Gilgamesh_Official
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  • sari_saarinen
    sari_saarinen8d
    Commented

    nah he dosent need to join avangers hes king so he needs to think his ppl first and steal some of that chitauri tech for his ppl

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    Reborn As Gilgamesh In Marvel
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  • sari_saarinen
    sari_saarinen8d
    Commented

    i think his character is fine at start he just transmigated so it was to be expected that everyhting isnt perfect as long he gets some of that juicy character development later then its finee and to be honest he soulndt completly be like gil gilgamesh was a tyrant so yeah

    Please be respectful while commenting in the latest chapter. I have been trying to work my way around the fact that I have absolutly zero experience in writting a story, and so I am aware I am making many mistakes your's and mine's favourite story writters wouldn't do. I am having dificulties regarding the persona of my main character, integrating Gilgamesh mannerisms and all of that while making it believeble, but its stressing me out on how hard it actually is. The last chapter I posted is supposed to be a catalyst for me to be able to make the main character more likeable and to make it possible to change is mind a bit without rewritten the whole damn beginning as many want it. But if I should rewritte the beginning it would feel as if everything I accomplished until now was in vain, so please give well thought criticism in the last chapter and tell me your opinions in a manner which I can use to adapt and better anything I need in this story.
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    Reborn As Gilgamesh In Marvel
    Anime & Comics · Gilgamesh_Official
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  • sari_saarinen
    sari_saarinen8d
    Commented

    good chapter

    Ch 15 | And So It Begins - Part II | (Shall Have a Rewritte Soon)
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    Reborn As Gilgamesh In Marvel
    Anime & Comics · Gilgamesh_Official
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  • sari_saarinen
    sari_saarinen9d
    Posted

    mc is one of those cucks who help others have harem even pushing girls who have feelings for him away hes pathetic......................................

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    I Am The Game's Villain
    Fantasy · NihilRuler
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  • sari_saarinen
    sari_saarinen10d
    Replied to freeraynman

    harem?

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    THE BOYS: Reborn As The Homelander
    TV · freeraynman
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  • sari_saarinen
    sari_saarinen10d
    Commented

    i still dont undestand why he is wasting his time playing hero hes probably immortal he could use his time so much better

    Ch 10 A beating
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    Young Justice: Vampire
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  • sari_saarinen
    sari_saarinen10d
    Commented

    so he will be another dog for batman braah

    Ch 4 Treading the Line
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    Young Justice: Vampire
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  • sari_saarinen
    sari_saarinen10d
    Commented

    weak

    Sunlight Sensitivity: The sun's rays are his anathema, burning and weakening.
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    Young Justice: Vampire
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  • sari_saarinen
    sari_saarinen10d
    Commented

    u are trying to justify his actions to not seem as dude with hero complex

    The homeless man, wide-eyed and trembling, could only stare in disbelief. Asher met his gaze, a smirk playing on his lips. This encounter was not about heroism or justice; it was a game, a test of his abilities, a way to satisfy his thirst for challenge and excitement.
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    Young Justice: Vampire
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  • sari_saarinen
    sari_saarinen11d
    Replied to Autistically

    yeah i read the free chapters and its prety good so far i was too quick to judge

    'She is mine, and I will see to it that she knows nothing but joy and contentment in her life from this point forward.'
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    Villain Simulator
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  • sari_saarinen
    sari_saarinen11d
    Replied to Autistically

    i will give it try 20 chapters or smh if its get better i was just expecting fang yuan type character or gu changge

    'She is mine, and I will see to it that she knows nothing but joy and contentment in her life from this point forward.'
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    Villain Simulator
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  • sari_saarinen
    sari_saarinen11d
    Commented

    i was expecting villain mc not simp

    'She is mine, and I will see to it that she knows nothing but joy and contentment in her life from this point forward.'
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    Villain Simulator
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  • sari_saarinen
    sari_saarinen11d
    Commented

    hopefully he starts acting like gilgamesh in this arc

    Ch 1 | And So It Begins - Part I |
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    Reborn As Gilgamesh In Marvel
    Anime & Comics · Gilgamesh_Official
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  • sari_saarinen
    sari_saarinen12d
    Commented
    Ch 4 Chapter 4: Do You Want Me To Be Responsible?
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    Villain: My Power Depends on Heroine's Imagination
    Anime & Comics · Anup_RyuSenju
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  • sari_saarinen
    sari_saarinen14d
    Commented

    with his strenght he would jump pretty high

    Huh?! This tingling sensation in my body. Spider-Sense... I saw a huge chunk of an entire wall coming our way. I grabbed Aunt May and pulled her into my arms as I jumped as high as possible. And right then and there, the wall hit the place we were standing just a moment ago. I fell on my back with her on top of me.
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    Spider-Man 0X
    Anime & Comics · Xcalibur_Xc
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