Reviews of One Piece Gold List: The Strongest Teacher!
One Piece Gold List: The Strongest Teacher!
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It's been a few months when I finish read this book , it's was really a very antersting storie and a new idea (for me) , I don't like write a long reviews so I will stop her , hop you guys enjoyed when you read this book
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chap 144 There is not much of a story. as a fanfic, it's okay ish. There are good things. The author knows the manga very well. He uses a large cast of character. Now, where is the story? Rifan is the boring op mc. He'sthe embodiment of boring. What does he want? He has a dojo system. ok. He trained there and became strong in everything, ok. He doesn't need the list then. He doesn't even need the reward items, zanpakuto he already has it, fruit doesn't care. He needs disciples to unlock new islands, ok. What for? He doesn't really care. He doesn't go out to visit or anything. The girls (his disciples) they turn into brainless bimbos at Rifan's touch. They become strong through the most boring method. Time skip training. What is a nice power up? A power up meaningful to the character development. Original Nami uses the art of weather to fight. That comes from her knowledge as a navigator. Here, the girls get chosen a path, then time skip to become op. It doesn't come from within them but is given even though the power given suit them. Also, as mentioned, they turn brainless as they immediately fall in love with Rifan upon meeting him. Nothing really deep. Handsome plus hero syndrome. I've only complained, so is there anything good? Yes, discord. The gold list gives a chat system. The interaction between the different characters is nice. Shiki is especially hilarious. There are two kinds of characters. An evolving character, one who changes throughout his experiences. Like Piccolo, who starts as a villain, then become a good guy (it doesn't have to be this extreme). A flat character, one who doesn't change. To be interesting, he's the one who changes the world around him. Like Goku, who turns Vegeta into a good guy. Obviously, Rifan isn't the first category. So he belongs to the second. What effect does he have? As I said, his disciples become his fan club. They become more or less the same aside Robin, who is more mature but still a fan. If anything interesting happens, feel free to tell me. I'm stopping there.
I liked the story (evident by the fact I read the 480+ chapters currently available - in 2 days, at that). The only negatives I can say is that Rifan only really takes on a supporting mentor role, and almost never does anything other than provide information, teach his disciples, and occasionally fights in the 4 or 5 occasions given by the golden list - even then, it's because he's as good as forced into it.
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Мені сподобалась ця книга. Не маючи повного уявлення про світ Ван Піс, цю книгу варто прочитати використовуючи Інтернет для пошуку зображення, історії різних героїв. Й з того що я прочитав, можу сказати що історія перестала бути канонічною з появою Ріфана, але все одно має певну подібність з оригіналом, по наповненню. Плюс до цієї книги є те, що головний герой не є незайманим і має якісь почуття до протилежної статі.
