DaoistSuperMate
of reading
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Read books
where 4
bonis chapters for power ranking?
more like 10k weak force
he is/i am
A guy created a guy using imagination then he somehow receives very op powers cuz imagination??? Though author tried to explain the crestions backstory so he wasnt just imagination?? (I did not understand what you want ur character to be. One moment he kills a guy just cuz he is annoying and next tries to make friends?) Though overall very plain story, no actualy world or character development. And your writing? Thats no storytelling its more like a statement after statement which feels very bland while reading. You certaintly have a lot of room to improve, best of luck