XiaoKongxu
300+ Chapter Read Review Writing Quality: 4/5 In the beginning chapters the writing quality was not the best but I can see that it has gone up in quality as the author has written more throughout the novel. Stability of Updates: 5/5 The novel updates often and constantly. Story Development 4/5 and World Background: 5/5 I have to say that I am really enjoying the story development and the world background. It is clear to me that the author has put a great deal of thought especially into the world background, the relationships between the races, relationships between gods, and how all the characters interact with each other. But I have to say that the "real life" side of things is rather lacking. It felt like some things came out of no where as if to give the main character some form of conflict or inner battle. Character Design 4/5: I actually enjoy that the author sometimes dedicates entire chapters to other characters perspectives such as the main character's best friend, his cousin, or another top player in the game. I like the interactions between characters, their own unique personalities, and their own unique roles in the gaming world. But the main character's over luckiness at the beginning of the novel was kind of a disappointment. It was exactly when he needed something that he got it shortly after. It does seem that the author has gotten away from this though in the later chapters so kudos! Summary: Give it a try! I know that the beginning few chapters may be a bit rough and the main character plot armor is a bit irritating at first but it does improve. I do not regret picking up this novel and I plan to keep reading!
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A really interesting story. The grammar could still use a little bit of help here and there but has massively improved compared to chapter 1. I really enjoy this story and hope more people read it because it is honestly deserving of so much more praise. Though the MC is quite OP, at least he has his fair share of struggles :). The fighting scenes have massively improved as well. Keep going author!
I really love the story... must recommend.... πππβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
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I started reading this where there was already 1000 chapters. I have caught up to the point where I must WAIT for new chapters to be published and it truly makes me sad. I can't afford to get privilege chapters. I check for new chapters daily. This book is amazing. It is content of the highest quality.
Pretty good gaming genre book. I mean, I spent abt 900 coins on this book including priveledge just to keep reading. So, if you want to believe a reviewer, believe that there is definitely something here that puts it above the normal heap. Rest I leave to your judgement. A point to note for the author though, the WB saga in the Wilde took quite a bit more chapters than I expected. I hope you would try to make an effort and not stretch a small arc oh so further. It makes it a bit boring.
I do think im gonna read more (further that chap ~20) but i just wanna say how the story begins in my eyes also spoilers for like the first 20 chapters. Class: a strong class but needs more exp (were dit i read this before) Equipment/pets: this happens because of the same reason, he does something no one has thought about: spending more time and effort with a pet. Because he does this and only this he gets a new title, new race and new equipment not because he did anything new but he accepted a neckless, dies to some over-lvled wolf, get spawed in some gods domain and gets the rest of the op stuff. And like he didnt have enough luck he first get a reward that gives a higher chanch on lootboxes and there after a lootbox and gets a 1% item. I mean no matter how much you love this novel you must atleast admit that in these first ~20 chapters something fishy was going on. to the writher: you can make the mc lucky, noting really wrong with it as long as you give some credit to skill or first kill or at least an item that gives luck (cheasy i know) but you cant just give him a 1% like that it just feels like you cant be botherd to writh a plot of how he got so strong.
I love this story so much. it is both logical bacround story and fantasy elements in the game. i love the main character and how he is a daemos race. i like the game and the develepment of the main charactera friends and stuff. i an looking forward to the meeting between the top guilds with the main character. i also like how you write the story. i love creepysoo. i like the characters game names. the auther is very original and creative.β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ
This is a very well done book with a good story, 3 dimensional characters with more being added as the story goes along, and does differentiate itself from other game stories very well. Honestly my only critique is the sentence and grammatical structure. I understand that English is not the author's first language and with that in mind they have done an exceptional job at avoiding the most common errors I've seen plague books on here, but I do want to say that the translation often makes sentences wordy and awkward with certain parts being repeated multiple times. This can make the book a little difficult to digest, that said it is preferable to not using enough description and ending up being too vague. Keep it up, you're doing great.
I love how easy it is to read, it doesn't complicate things too much, I love how the author substantiate smaller details while interrelating it with the major details and backgrounds. Totally dope! must read and highly recommended! Moreso, this novel is smooth and enjoyable at the same time. For sure this is worth to read! π―