Amazing story, biggest problem are the lack of chapters so I hope that at some point we can at least get a chapter a day, hopefully not at the cost of the quality

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I really dont like Eldrian here he sound like this great injustice has been done but al I can see is a somewhat biased viewpoint from a researcher and a crying child that doesnt get his way because something that he feels/thinks arnt considered facts

Yea he asked why you would put yourself in danger over someone who he considers a simulation and then you got angry and lost your shit

I wanna make you realize his argument is “maybe were both fake” i repeat his argument doesnt say anything about ANW being real but it makes it somehow better when both world are fake

Yea you were not in danger, besides the soul poisen

Didnt he also take 10.000 gold coins instead of 100.000 dollars a few chapters ago

Yea mother is dying but it has been a long day and i need a shower

If he doesnt trust her why doesnt he create a new world space incase she lied about there only being 2 teleporters

Its always sad to see a great novel become unreadable because this kind of bc. you may read over it or you may think its not so bad but you also may realise that its kind of not-ok and that you hope for example that there is a system that says its not-ok and when that isnt there and our beloved mc also doesnt do something about it, our beloved mc isnt such a good person anymore. You may say that its alright because its a game but this isnt a game its a novel about a game and i hope that you realise that these arnt real people these are thoughts from someone who in my opinion altough talanted are flawed.

Great story and i will only say the following thing because the bad things allways stand out. The power growth and i dont mean hes instanly op like the many other novels no what i mean is, is that he grows stronger were he can beat a group of basic monsters but has to risk his live for a intermediate (some time after this he defeats a king tier boss with some help) than he grows stronger and than he can defeat a dozen advanced monsters and after this he jumps straigh to solo defeating emperor beasts and after that he skips legendairy and demigod and goes against a demon tier beast i know he has mayor help with the beaat but earlier leo couldnt hurt a dead demon tier beast now i understand that this is a stronger beast because its used beacause its the strongest beast they could find. If my rant didnt make it clear i dont really like the jumps in powerlevel and it isnt like theres a mayor change if i remember correctly the only thing that could spike his powerlevel evertime are his stats that get max out in a few moment because of his ability to gain stats from just drinking blood again i dont know if i mist something big but most of the time he just geta his stats behind the scenes. now for my final part of the rant what this al binds together i only see that he has gotten stronger when he fights this is were the whole problem stems from he fights we know what he can do than i feel like he just does nothing for some chapters and hes stronger with leaps and bounds i know he does things inbetween but i never had the feeling that he does something so big that he could dominate someone were he lost to him before

I mean i know he is the bad guy and all but i feel like our mc is taking this a bit personal

Me thinking: woah priest original, you should realise that if she wants to help she could be a ranger(she can sneak and attack from a distance . Me thinking to myself: wait now im un-original (female player almost always being priest, rangers and sometimes mages)

Yes i see, i’m gonna die

I do think im gonna read more (further that chap ~20) but i just wanna say how the story begins in my eyes also spoilers for like the first 20 chapters. Class: a strong class but needs more exp (were dit i read this before) Equipment/pets: this happens because of the same reason, he does something no one has thought about: spending more time and effort with a pet. Because he does this and only this he gets a new title, new race and new equipment not because he did anything new but he accepted a neckless, dies to some over-lvled wolf, get spawed in some gods domain and gets the rest of the op stuff. And like he didnt have enough luck he first get a reward that gives a higher chanch on lootboxes and there after a lootbox and gets a 1% item. I mean no matter how much you love this novel you must atleast admit that in these first ~20 chapters something fishy was going on. to the writher: you can make the mc lucky, noting really wrong with it as long as you give some credit to skill or first kill or at least an item that gives luck (cheasy i know) but you cant just give him a 1% like that it just feels like you cant be botherd to writh a plot of how he got so strong.

Would have been a nice detail if it wasnt full (because of the flight practice)

Don’t worry, it can happen to anybody

Its sound cool but i just wanna say i would have loves it if he used a hammer and not because hes a blacksmith but because he has a big build. Now i know with crafting and all hes gonna get more AGI because hes using his hand so a sword is more usefull but i just wanna put this out there it would have been fun

Bit slow at the begining i mean lets be honest at the time he was lether working you were also like when is he gonna slay some dragons but for the rest it’s a fun read and there are some worldbuilding element in the first few chapters so it allright.

I just want to say that censoring that word was a good idea as it wouls have made it alot darker than it needs to be