A really interesting story. The grammar could still use a little bit of help here and there but has massively improved compared to chapter 1. I really enjoy this story and hope more people read it because it is honestly deserving of so much more praise. Though the MC is quite OP, at least he has his fair share of struggles :). The fighting scenes have massively improved as well. Keep going author!
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