Review Detail of Lord_Malach in Omega Summoner

This is a very well done book with a good story, 3 dimensional characters with more being added as the story goes along, and does differentiate itself from other game stories very well. Honestly my only critique is the sentence and grammatical structure. I understand that English is not the author's first language and with that in mind they have done an exceptional job at avoiding the most common errors I've seen plague books on here, but I do want to say that the translation often makes sentences wordy and awkward with certain parts being repeated multiple times. This can make the book a little difficult to digest, that said it is preferable to not using enough description and ending up being too vague. Keep it up, you're doing great.