Satan03
The writing quality at the start is very janky but it improves a lot in the later chapters and the drama in this novel is SPICY. Really like it. Although the update schedule is bad and it's most likely because author works on 4 novels simultaneously. I have seen some authors do 2 novels at once but this author does FOUR!!
wow just 14 chapters in and the pay wall hits. just wow. so anyway, the story isn't that great. the mc mainly just monologs the whole time. might be interesting later but I doubt the monologs will stop... show the story don't tell it and the scenes with the boss was just way too much, one paragraph his head it beat bald with iron pipes and disfigured but the next round he talks and if he was beat bald with iron pipes he would be dead with that much blunt force trauma. so short of the fake account post with 5 stars I woukd stay away and anyone charging before readers get a chance to even get into the story isn't worth reading, might as well put a pay wall one chapter 1.
I'm on va-ca-tion. That's why I de-fin-itely need more chapters to soothe myself in- this noisy plain place. Need more of Ren adventure. Ahhh.....that b*** Mar-y wonder when she going to get some sense- in her brain. Author just don't make her th fl. or else my tiny miny hea-rt gonna hav a mental breakdown. I desperately m asking you or else I'm gonna scream at my mom to get a beating. So, I can relieve my grieve.About the Novel itself. It's wonderful. Especially, the writing style. Hohoho.
This novel is pretty good, have good potential but I only have a slight problem with the power levels and I write this to see if the author can explain them, I mean the stars powers level is pretty easy to understand, what I don't understand is how it correlate with the system, the part of the elements and bloodline limit all good but I don't really understand how goes strength and mana, for example, they have to get to 100 before you advance a star? It isn't really explained or I don't really understand it. I also sugest putting the star level in the system to make it more clear. All this are personal opinion, apart from this the novel is pretty good I recommend to read it. [img=recommend][img=recommend]