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Reviewed6dCommentedThis is one of the best looking yet somehow worst starts I have seen in a Novel. There was the feeling that this is good but the writing no matter how many words were used there was little meaning. Its like a teen saying profound words that look wise but have no meaning this is tge the art of Capping.
Ch 1 The Well of the Ultimate- Reviewed6dPosted
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This is the most trash written apocalypse story ever probably even the Edge Lord would cringe seeing Mcs behaviour
The three young men looked at one another, and saw Zane staring at them with his cold dark eyes, while his blood-stained hand wielded the grip of his combat knife. Normally, they would laugh at Zane if he dared to command them, or perhaps even give him a nice beating. - Reviewed6dReplied to Reviewed
ip:up
As for Zane, he took a seat at the back of the class, gazing out the second-story window with the same expressionless face that he always maintained during class. He had no idea how he was going to escape this situation with his life intact… All he could do was wait… Wait for the door to break down, and for his life to be taken by these rabid corpses. - Reviewed6dCommented
Why does he just give ip seems like a lame Mc
As for Zane, he took a seat at the back of the class, gazing out the second-story window with the same expressionless face that he always maintained during class. He had no idea how he was going to escape this situation with his life intact… All he could do was wait… Wait for the door to break down, and for his life to be taken by these rabid corpses. - Reviewed6dReplied to Reviewed
If if it was 01.04 and they took it as a joke
However, it was not April 1st, and this was quickly pointed out by other members of the class who confirmed that this breaking news was the reality that they were all currently living in. - Reviewed6dCommented
Would been much funnier if it was
However, it was not April 1st, and this was quickly pointed out by other members of the class who confirmed that this breaking news was the reality that they were all currently living in. - Reviewed6dCommented
??? It has intelligence ?
The attack instantly killed the deranged police officer, who Zane stared at in disbelief. Had he not witnessed this very scene himself, he would never believe it if someone were to recount exactly what had just happened. - Reviewed6dCommented
And that for a reason because its a waste to focus on 2 students if there more. Your not their Master of the same sect but a teacher of the whole class. Realistically she would now teach Mc a mlre advanced style for self learning then focus on other Students again
" Wow, 6 years I've been a teacher, but I've never conducted second round tests so soon…." She murmured, as she instructed her assistant to arrange for two practise boulders. - Reviewed6dCommented
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" Wow, 6 years I've been a teacher, but I've never conducted second round tests so soon…." She murmured, as she instructed her assistant to arrange for two practise boulders. - Reviewed6dCommented
The most unrealistic thing is for a Trainer to say this. If one Perfected it then any errors she will make in the future are considered as a miracle
"Wow-, looks like we have a talented student in our mix who has already perfected the fundamentals of swordsmanship. Bravo-" Instructor Mae said, as she clapped in appreciation for Sophia while the other students joined. - Reviewed6dReplied to Reviewed
will=wield
Both his swords weighed approximately 7.5 kilograms each, as his choice was slightly above average in terms of weight, but having chosen two, he was one of the very few dual wielders in the class. - Reviewed6dCommented
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From start to finish, she made the whole process look so easy that Rocky almost believed that swordsmanship could be done by even a child, but then he saw the dull wooden blade in her hand and gulped in awe. - Reviewed6dReplied to Reviewed
and unreal
" Look at my palms, the grip I'm showing you now is for a one handed swordsman, who uses a light sword that focuses on agility. - Reviewed1mthReplied to Fate_kisurhama
I obviously mean in RL not VR
"As for the problem of rewards, I don't think that's even a huge problem. After all, Blue Star has a population of ten billion. Even if I did a conservative estimate of having one billion players playing my game, I'd still amass a billion points daily and that's excluding new players as well as those players completing my games." - Reviewed1mthCommented
Guy???
This guy finally surrendered. He slowly pressed down on her body. Ringo Ameyuri's body stiffened, but she didn't resist. - Reviewed1mthReplied to Reviewed
*to a little child
"We should start by having children!" - Reviewed1mthReplied to Foxtrot_141
I hope your moms a sshole will be r(@)ped till it tears with bloodAndCum
'One day, I'll be a Master too.' - Reviewed1mthCommented
Ok now it makes NO sense if he would answer like this why did he not before
Sunny shook his head. Jet shrugged and continued: - Reviewed1mthCommented
Trash Name Dreamer is millions of times better
Sleeper Sunless.