winterdaisy55
this story is so intriguing. I've only read a couple of chapters and I'm honestly hooked by it. The start of the story was quite painful to read but I understand why it needed to be there. the development of the story is good and I like the chemistry between the leads. Honestly, I can't wait for the upcoming chapters. Thank you so much for your hard work!
Iām not a fan of romance, at all, but imI always give a honest review even if the story isnāt my cup if tea. First off, good story and writing. You know how to keep a reader engaged. Although the long paragraphs in the beginning threw me off, cut them a little (long paragraphs can get overwhelming). There were tiny grammar mistakes, but it did not mess up the story at all. Your pacing is good and thank you for not automatically putting them together. When it comes to mate stories, especially wolves, some authors like to write the mates getting together right then and there cause they are mated. No, the couple needs to learn each other and spend time together before getting together. So I applaud you for that. Other than that, even though I couldnāt get into the story cause it is romance, you are doing a fine job. Keep up the good work!
Ok a romance story with wolves? sign me up!! I love romance stories and if my pen name is anything to go by it's easy to get that i love wolves and when im presented with a story with these two things i can't help but dive right in, the story is great not to slow not to fast, the pace is on the point, the characters interresting, and the writing just wonderful chefs kiss right here! To anyone reading this review, go read this your missing out! Now if you excuse me, i have to finish reding this gem here. Keep it going Author!!
Oof, you left me with a cliffhanger. This was a good story to read, even though it has such violent things in it, I think I can still describe it as mellow. Maybe because the ML is gentle and their interaction when they're not in the human form. I already have some suspicions about the female lead's ancestry, but I won't delve into it. The writing quality was pretty decent, but you still have some minor mistakes, like punctuation or wrong pronouns. The story development is decent and I liked it quite a lot, the only thing that bugs me is fl's tendency to get into trouble. I do understand it's a part of the story, but still, it seems too much. Tbh, I'd like it that in the end she either leaves to live in the cottage in the forest alone or with just ml if she accepts him. She shouldn't be in a golden cage. Character design is nice, I like andrew and Bob the most, they're the kind of guys you'd want to be your friends and maybe even SO. Well, ML is the lead, so nothing will happen with them, unfortunately...(give them too a nice girl/boy?) FL is a trouble magnet but that's not a character trait, so I will tell you that I'm satisfied with her personality. Despite being only 17 and tortured for years, she has the will to live and wants to be independent. She actually tries to improve, but she's inexperienced when it comes to many things. She also has a mature character, I'd like to see her growth. The world background wasn't the clearest. To be honest, until the carriage chapter, I really thought the story was contemporary. It might be my fault since I didn't look at all of the tags before reading. Anyway, I don't have anything against it, and I can say that I enjoyed reading this. Keep it up!
Damn you that father. Damn everyone except for Mom and Anna. Now I'm pleased to see werewolfs š¤£ Great writing btw. It managed to get my attention even before reading the past few sentences. It's bery engaging and wholesome. I feel confuse whether to be sad, angry or relief. That must be what the main character felt.
The writing quality of this story improved dramatically after the first few chapters. For the later chapters I found no grammatical errors. Props to the author! The premise is interesting, and the author wastes no time getting the plot moving. Looking forward to more development of characters and world :)
I like how the first chapter starts, as it exudes the hardships of the protagonist that can grip the curious minds of it's readers. It appeals to the emotions which people can sympathize to. But most of all I like the foreshadowing of the Lone wolf with read eyes that makes an appearance later at the end, as a man with red eyes. Definitely commendable and worth reading. Best wishes to you author, hope you'll keep on writing.