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I’m not a fan of romance, at all, but imI always give a honest review even if the story isn’t my cup if tea. First off, good story and writing. You know how to keep a reader engaged. Although the long paragraphs in the beginning threw me off, cut them a little (long paragraphs can get overwhelming). There were tiny grammar mistakes, but it did not mess up the story at all. Your pacing is good and thank you for not automatically putting them together. When it comes to mate stories, especially wolves, some authors like to write the mates getting together right then and there cause they are mated. No, the couple needs to learn each other and spend time together before getting together. So I applaud you for that. Other than that, even though I couldn’t get into the story cause it is romance, you are doing a fine job. Keep up the good work!

My Long Lost Mate

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Thank you for reading! :)