Review Detail of EldritchTheDead in My Long Lost Mate

I like how the first chapter starts, as it exudes the hardships of the protagonist that can grip the curious minds of it's readers. It appeals to the emotions which people can sympathize to. But most of all I like the foreshadowing of the Lone wolf with read eyes that makes an appearance later at the end, as a man with red eyes. Definitely commendable and worth reading. Best wishes to you author, hope you'll keep on writing.