Review Detail of LyingCrowPromises in My Long Lost Mate

Oof, you left me with a cliffhanger. This was a good story to read, even though it has such violent things in it, I think I can still describe it as mellow. Maybe because the ML is gentle and their interaction when they're not in the human form. I already have some suspicions about the female lead's ancestry, but I won't delve into it. The writing quality was pretty decent, but you still have some minor mistakes, like punctuation or wrong pronouns. The story development is decent and I liked it quite a lot, the only thing that bugs me is fl's tendency to get into trouble. I do understand it's a part of the story, but still, it seems too much. Tbh, I'd like it that in the end she either leaves to live in the cottage in the forest alone or with just ml if she accepts him. She shouldn't be in a golden cage. Character design is nice, I like andrew and Bob the most, they're the kind of guys you'd want to be your friends and maybe even SO. Well, ML is the lead, so nothing will happen with them, unfortunately...(give them too a nice girl/boy?) FL is a trouble magnet but that's not a character trait, so I will tell you that I'm satisfied with her personality. Despite being only 17 and tortured for years, she has the will to live and wants to be independent. She actually tries to improve, but she's inexperienced when it comes to many things. She also has a mature character, I'd like to see her growth. The world background wasn't the clearest. To be honest, until the carriage chapter, I really thought the story was contemporary. It might be my fault since I didn't look at all of the tags before reading. Anyway, I don't have anything against it, and I can say that I enjoyed reading this. Keep it up!