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What can ! say except.... well done.Having English as your fourth language yet me not being able to find any blemishes in your work on first read, well done. For designing a realistic charachter that isn't too dark on one end, or happy go lucky on the other, well done. For gripping me with a near death encounter at the start, where the mc is only alive because of his quick thinking and calm in the face of oblivion, which reminded me of one of my Favourite books, well done. Well done Sha, this ones for the library.
Read the first few chapters and I can say that I will continue reading this one. I had read a novel like this and if anyone know 'Master Hunter K' that's what I'm talking about. I really like that novel so 'My Last Hunt' really appeals to me. The leveling system is interesting, I think. The premise is very clear and every detail mentioned has meaning. Readers will not feel burdened in reading the first few chapters. Good writing skills. I actually learned something after reading it. I will use them in my own novel. Keep up the good work. Good luck!
🤩 had me hooked from the start! I really like the way you tell the story, MC seems like a super awesome guy by the way he cares for his little brother and then is forced to this other world bc he cares for him to much 🥺 Your writing quality is really nice for not knowing english very well so No complaints from me there. The flow is smooth too not too fast. your doing great 🥳
This novel was an enjoyable read. And a good recommendation for readers who like to enjoy a thrilling story with good plot twists. [img=coins] Writing Quality: Except for a few grammatical errors, the flow of the story felt smooth. Stability of Updates: Not very fast, neither at a slow pace. A well-balanced speed. Story development: One word. Good, Character Design: the focal point, the MC, has a good rhythm in his characteristics and doesn't make rash decisions, a very rare quality among webnovel MCs. World Background: Can't say much; a lot to explore.
From the writing to the characters everything is written beautifully. Although I haven't finished reading, it grabbed my attention from chapter one. The way the author progress' the storyline is neither too fast or slow and it has the perfect amount of detail. The ML starts from the beginning, level zero, and as he levels up, it feels like I am experiencing the journey with the ML. Its definitely a roller coaster of emotions but I like a book that can do that. For example one minute I would be shocked the next I would be excited. This book is definitely not my cup of tea as I prefer romance over anything but this book was fresh. I never thought I would read a book like this but I have nothing but praises. All those romance lovers should also give this book a go. Its different but its thrilling.
To begin with the review I'll quote the storyline first, which appears to be a horror plotline but then you realize it is a system story with a responsible MC and has a fantasy tinge draped to make it even more interesting. Taking about the narration style and quality, I must say it is absolutely flawless. (You gotta believe my words) And considering the title of the book I can somewhat predict the story but I gotta accept that didn't expect the realistic world building. It deviates from traditional system novels in this aspect.