đ€© had me hooked from the start! I really like the way you tell the story, MC seems like a super awesome guy by the way he cares for his little brother and then is forced to this other world bc he cares for him to much đ„ș Your writing quality is really nice for not knowing english very well so No complaints from me there. The flow is smooth too not too fast. your doing great đ„ł
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