Romeru
Hello, poor author here. I would just like to point out the things to expect from this book: The Good: 1. I will do my unyielding best to be an author deserving to be at the top, even though we are currently at the bottom. 2. I am your friend. The Bad: 1. Expect me to make grammar mistakes. I mostly mix up my gender pronouns since they don't exist in my language. 2. Pacing will shift from time to time. Mostly fast, but when it is slow, it is slow. 3. I don't write with an ending, so I am as clueless to the story as you are, we are in this journey, literally together. 4. Plot holes - If we fall in them, we fall together. Always together. 5. Damaged MC - Some of you might not like it. Our MC is a survivor of child abuse, so do expect some moments of weakness and irrationality. Just hints and pieces. 6. Character first, System second - Although this is a System book, I tend to focus more on the characters. 7. Inconsitencies - It's a book about a speedster, so there might be inconsistencies here and there. But I will try my best to avoid it. Here's what to do before reading this book: 1. Play some music. 2. If you are on the toilet, please wash your butt first. 3. Shut your mind from from the notion of realism. I will try my best to be as realistic as possible, but there's only so much I can do when someone can breathe fire from their nose. 4. Please avoid comparing it from other novels, you might end up not enjoying the book :( Got this from Kota btw. Other than that, I hope you enjoy reading :)
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So, just finished reading till chapter 50, I will update this when there is more chapters and I actually read them. This is my opinion, if you think otherwise about anything I wrote here just share it, itβs always nice to hear other opinions. First of all, I read the first couple chapters a while back. Till the fifth or seventh chapter I didnβt really liked the start and yesterday I was a bit bored and decided to continue and see if this is any good (that was a good decision lol). I read a couple more chapters till 12-14 and I was starting to get into it, a couple more chapters and I was totally into it. I spent all my time reading this today and I regret none of it. Once you get over the first ~10 chapters it really gets better, the pace is not too slow or too fast, the only problems would be that the chapters are a bit short and that you donβt exactly know how strong the main character actually is. Although I really liked the story and the characters, I was always a bit lost thinking βIs he stronger than him/her?β. It would be a lot better if we knew with some sort of rank or power scale(?) how strong people are. These are the only reasons why I removed 1 star in character design and world background. (I canβt say that I was a bit reluctant about removing a star from the world background, but canβt be helped) :/ I donβt know if the scale Iβm talking about is actually planned or not but I would definitely love to see it and be aware if itβs a right choice from the main character to fight/run in his future encounters. Overall I think it is really good, canβt wait for more chapters!
No offense intended to the author but I hope somebody pirate this novel properly because it is one of the best original novels on this site/app. I miss the days when we complain about watching ads to unlock premium chapters. Then the days when we complain about the need to use SS to unlock those chapters. It was still manageable back then to catch up on chapters of two or three novels. So, F.U.C.K. you QI for becoming such a glutton. I hope authors get paid more now that everything is almost behind a paywall. I apologize to the author for not giving you a gift because I remember that gifts only bought using paid coins are beneficial to you guys and also, I need those coins to unlock chapters of the novels I follow.
Hello Author . I started reading your story and instantly fell in love with it. The story itself was mind blowing. There were times when I got frustrated cause of all the unanswered questions but it was worth the wait. Once Volume 4 started I didn't even know what was going on it was just a mess. the story took a wrong turn quick. I don't know what happened to going on journey to kill a few Gods to Evans in Asgard being a teacher. Also the insect not working for me. Why even add the third parent? I was also shipping Evans and Victoria. But that didn't work out. I am also confused on his name, is it Evans or Van? Anyways other elements of the story are great and the story at the beginning was great it just took a wrong turn quickly. So I had to drop the story at some point .
Not much to say yet but it's the first original speedster protagonist I've found in this app so that cool.... The story at the moment is pretty good but nothing much has happened as of yet and mc has hardly even looked at his system for more than a couple seconds so we'll just have to wait and see if it's as good as I think it could be....