Really intense start, keeps your attention with ease. Descriptions are wonderful and a joy to read, with good writing quality. The author wastes no time putting in some romance right at the beginning and keeps up the integrity of the writing throughout. The plot itself is also intriguing, loving the fact that some details are being held off of to really create a nice sense of wanting to read on. If you're looking for good easy to read romance and magic, then this is the novel to pick up!
After reading this so far, you should read it too. This is what you call 'Show, not tell'. The author really detailed those are in need of details. It's quite rare to see other authors do 'Show, not tell.' When I started reading this, I stood to the point where I imagined everything single detail in my mind — It was as if I was in the story itself. You know the feeling of just sitting and listening in the sidelines? It's like I'm just the side character of the story. Sitting to where the MC doesn't notice you, that's what I imagine. Let's say, "Shivering feverishly, the young woman crept up the stairs of the old abandoned warehouse. A slight and startling tingle tiptoed down her spine, and she turned abruptly halfway up the flight of steps to see if someone had entered the decrepit building. Gazing intently around the lobby, the woman concluded that it must have been a breeze from the unlocked window. Cautiously this time, she continued up the rotting stairs. Upon reaching the second to last step, the young woman felt a rush of fear wash over her, and her head began to spin and the walls whipped around her – while her feet remained rooted to the steps. Desperately, she tried to scream, yet no sound escaped her mouth." In the passage given, you can already imagine everything, right? I'm the side character. She can't see me, but I can see her. That's what I think about this story. Overall, everything's great. I enjoy the narration of the story, a lot. If you read this, it isn't a waste of time. You'll be in Luck to read the story the author made.
I should have written a review of for this a long time ago, but I really like this book. It is so well described and the story is just so fun. Since it was almost 60 chapters I can read this almost everyday without worrying about finishing it too fast. Hopefully the author can upload more son as I really like everything about this book. Keep up the amazing work!
Wow! It's rare to find a story quite like this. I love everything about this novel! The detailed descriptions, the captivating plot, the incredible characters with interesting personalities the expert world building, the creative writing style, Everything! I am hooked!! Beautiful. Just beautiful. I recommend to everyone! Great job author[img=recommend]
When people usually gives a perfect five you kind of become skeptical, but I am telling you that it is worth it. From the first chapter it's title is already justified. The characterization of the details just gives you this clear picture in your head and the visualization is amazing! Keep it up author!
This is Brandon Gould i am responding to a Review Swap here is my review The story is very interesting and has a lot of uniqe chartors. the diolage is very descpitve and the story starts out strongly and progress at a very good pace. I will be sure to contue to read this book to see where the story leads
This book is amazing! A well-crafted novel about gods and their characters! The author placed a lot of effort describing the scenes! I really love the fact that the world-building in this novel is really amazing! The only points I'd like to point out are the tenses and passive voice misused. Although there are mixed and matched of tenses, it did not hindered me from reading! However, it would be nice if those words would be fixed soon to ensure and improve the quality of the work~ (the passive voice misuse are verbs that are not in their active forms. Some lines that I found in the novel are ""was being dented" and "a lightning storm was gathering". Fixing these would enhance readability for us readers. Kudos for the author!
Hey author! I hope everything is going great for you. ✨I read your book and by far it’s one of the greatest works I’ve read here on Webnovel. I loved all the complexity in your characters and the way you set up your scenes. I think you are an amazing writer. 😍 You have such a way with words, and I love your writing style. Literally cannot wait to read more! I gave you five stars hehehe If you ever have any free time, you should check out my new novel UnderHerSkin. I think you would really enjoy reading it. But if you don’t have time, I totally understand! Best of luck reading & writing!! This message turned out longer than I thought, but have a wonderful day!!!❤️❤️❤️