Review Detail of kuhaku_sora in MORTAL GODS: Enouka

This book is amazing! A well-crafted novel about gods and their characters! The author placed a lot of effort describing the scenes! I really love the fact that the world-building in this novel is really amazing! The only points I'd like to point out are the tenses and passive voice misused. Although there are mixed and matched of tenses, it did not hindered me from reading! However, it would be nice if those words would be fixed soon to ensure and improve the quality of the work~ (the passive voice misuse are verbs that are not in their active forms. Some lines that I found in the novel are ""was being dented" and "a lightning storm was gathering". Fixing these would enhance readability for us readers. Kudos for the author!