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Laevateins

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I came up with my idea for my book when I walked my dog, I guess that pretty much just sums me up.

2021-05-20 JoinedUnited Kingdom
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    Laevateins2yr
    Replied to CHRIS2169XP

    You may think its cliche, but I implore you to read more of the story .

    As I try to recall all the abilities The Entity had quickly described to me, I realized that these abilities seemed a little too strong. Then again I had no idea what kind of world I was going into so it was hard to make a fair judgement.
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    Laevateins2yr
    Replied to ImaginationGalaxy

    What do you mean "Eww"

    "Rose open the portal and Emily get everything ready. I'll let Genji know of the situation."
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    Laevateins2yr
    Replied to Domn

    Thanks for letting me know, I just fixed it now

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    Laevateins2yr
    Replied to lost_meaning

    OHHH I GET IT, didn't think about that xD

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    Laevateins2yr
    Replied to lost_meaning

    I have no idea what this is supposed to mean, but I'll take that as a compliment xD

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    Laevateins2yr
    Replied to Daoistv38Amp

    HI! I am really glad you liked my book, I have been extremly busy with school work, but I plan to come back to writing in a couple days. Hope to see you there :D

    Ch 30 Lightning Angel Final Part
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    Laevateins2yr
    Replied to yohananmikhael

    Also to add, his lines are supposed to be cringe, if that makes sense.

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    Laevateins2yr
    Replied to yohananmikhael

    I understand where you are coming from, I don't know how much you've read but yes, the MC thinks he is cool and is overconfident, but soon learns over time that he isn't that strong. I implore you to read the rest of my book and if you still have this opinion let me know. Thanks for the review, but it would be nice to know what you liked as well seeing as you gave me 4 stars.

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    Laevateins2yr
    Replied to ASTARTE

    No, he won't be a fat merman xD.

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    Laevateins2yr
    Replied to Korishirou

    And Z yeah, hopefully it is still understandable

    A B C D E F G H I K L M N O P R S T U V W X Y
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    Laevateins2yr
    Replied to Shady41

    The reason he didn't was because he was cocky, and didn't think he needed to

    I needed to look at his stats, I needed to understand exactly who I was up against.
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  • Laevateins
    Laevateins2yr
    Posted

    I think this book has a lot of potential. The concept is amazing, and I am really interested to see how the story progresses. The world background is really well done and the descriptive writing is also amazing at some points. A couple things that I personally didn't enjoy: -The dialogue style isn't the type I really enjoy reading, for me it ruins the flow when you write it like its a script, but that's just a personal issue. -The amount of info it dumps in the beginning can be a bit overwhelming, another personal thing. Don't let the small and nit-picky problems discourage from reading this novel. It has a lot of potential and I am going to continue reading as I am excited for its development. Keep going author you are doing great!

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    Laevateins2yr
    Commented

    I think there is too much info here xD. Maybe spread it out a little more because hard to absorb,

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    Laevateins2yr
    Commented

    Now thats a lot races

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    Laevateins2yr
    Commented

    He slapped himself xD?

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    Laevateins2yr
    Commented

    So this is a world made of diamonds I am assuming its not part of the same universe as Japan, so are the names just based off the Japanese or is it related?

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    Laevateins2yr
    Commented

    I also enjoyed this chapter, the emotions are amazing, just a little complicated xD.

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    Laevateins2yr
    Commented

    I can imagine the devastation

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    Laevateins2yr
    Commented

    Wow, I can imagine that pretty well, that is a biigggggg world. Its cool trying to imagine what it would would feel like living on that world.

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    Laevateins2yr
    Commented

    Me with Raiden Shogun

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