MaxwellKHA
I really hope the author rent an editor to fix the complex sentences of the novel. there's also some inconsistencies in the book itself. However, for Webnovel standard, this is quite good. Updating stability is quite good with author updating at least one chapter every day. Character design: Good, the mc weak and feels weak at start..however, the sense of progression is just satisfying to read. The upgrade that the mc gets is just awesome to feel.
It's been a while(2 years and a few months) since you've updated any of your stories, so I decided to try updating my review in an attempt to ask you a question, sir author are you planning to ever continue your stories or are you not planning to write anymore because of personal reasons, webnovel's infamous pyramid scheme like writer's contracts and/or some of the more toxic comments I've seen posted on your most recent chapters? Because honestly, while I wouldn't blame you for not continuing your stories due to some of the things I mentioned above, I know that I personally would love to see you continue or even potentially do a rewrite of your current incomplete works. Also, I hope that whatever you may have going on, you're doing well the last few years have been hard on everyone worldwide, both personally and economically.