I really hope the author rent an editor to fix the complex sentences of the novel. there's also some inconsistencies in the book itself. However, for Webnovel standard, this is quite good. Updating stability is quite good with author updating at least one chapter every day. Character design: Good, the mc weak and feels weak at start..however, the sense of progression is just satisfying to read. The upgrade that the mc gets is just awesome to feel.

Nice chapter, great job author