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DemiGod_of_Fate1yrCommentedSpoiler alert!!!!!!! The elements are basically a representation of the fundamental elements of energy (fire and water) , space (Air and earth) and time ( Darkness and light) and spirit which when all controlled makes one a supreme magus or something. . that is what the book's later reveal will be I think. .
Ch 1977 Becoming a Magus (Part 3)- DemiGod_of_Fate1yrCommented
this is how the tyranids came into existence (a Warhammer 40k reference)
Ves had just come up with the most brilliant or the stupidest idea ever since he entered the Red Ocean. - DemiGod_of_Fate1yrPosted
read the first 50 chapters and let me warn you if you came expecting something like Release That Witch or Enlightened Empire, you will be sorely and utterly let down. . this story is more like the emo try hard version of them both, with an unnecessary amount of plot holes. . like where did he get all that gunpowder from if it wasn't so widely used, or where does the manpower to make so many tools come from as a small barony with a pop of 20k can hardly have 10 blacksmiths. The MC is also an asshole and through trying very hard to emulate a German feels more like a character from a Wuxia or xianxia novel. on one hand he shows how good to the people he is. . on the other hand massacres innocent conscripts. at first he just wants to bring agricultural and industrial reforms but after just one battle he wants to be the emperor.the side characters are less like people and more like set pieces that are used to explain whatever absurd shit the MC pulls out of his ass. . establishing a spy network in a matter of weeks or an fully functional industry or a priest to bend to his will or a general to lead his forces and such characters fall into the MC's lap whenever he goes on a stroll. the author's unhealthy obsession for meat made him forget that not even nobles could afford meat every day in the 1400s. not unless an agricultural revolution took place. just by walking around the MC solves all problems. the so called Nobel Intrigue that the writer so pathetically fails at is even worst. if a Baron has a mine a percentage of it automatically belongs to his Lord as taxes which in this case would be the count. but the writer forgets or neglects that part of the noble ladder. The Baron is a Nobel because the count lets him be one. and dumpling to top this shit cake is his plot by/against his teenage brother. you do not get family executed just because they tried to plot against you. . the worst outcome that can happen is exile. if every time a nobleman had to kill one of his sons because he tried to plot against his siblings there would be no nobles left. if the MC was even a bit more edgy he would be a dodecahedron. the only thing this novel does is dropping names of some obscure German things and some firearms. final verdict: read if you like Edgelord MC but are tierd of Wuxia or xianxia novels. . because it is essentially the same shit cooked in a different way. . this novels takes the worst writing methods of Chinese , Japanise, Korean and European writing style and character development to produce the quantum shitcake. where is MC is edgy with absurdly thick plot armor, luck that is worldbreaking, and the ability to produce and invent stuff out of his ass.
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Protagonist's luck?
He was testing Gunther's knowledge of his craft; after all, Berengar had no use for fools who did what they were told because that was the tradition. He needed thinkers, men who could grasp ahold of new technologies and implement them on his behalf. Defying all odds, the first farmer he came across was such a man. - DemiGod_of_Fate1yrCommented
does nobody give a damn about the 7000 Greeks?
After arriving at her room, Berengar opened the door and walked the girl to her bed, where he picked her up and tucked her in. For a second, he forgot how frail his body was and struggled dearly to accomplish the deed. After tucking the girl into her bed where she was comfortable, Berengar began to spin the tale of Leonidas and the three hundred Spartans who had protected Greece from a Persian Invasion at Thermopolaye Pass. - DemiGod_of_Fate1yrCommented
did he just called the vandal pilots dumb? 🤣🤣
Although the exact mechanisms were a bit difficult to explain in full, the simplified analogy was enough for even the slowest Vandals to comprehend the actual effect of the Deceptor Project. - DemiGod_of_Fate2yrCommented
Doesn't he already have one. . the one from Tulsa's mech the bird
As a harasser mech for the Flagrant Vandal Mech Legion, the mech's primary strengths centered around its elusiveness, its persistence and its deceptive nature. - DemiGod_of_Fate2yrReplied to Hasaki
somewhere in the first few chapters when he initially found the metal scroll
Succession System - DemiGod_of_Fate2yrCommented
I think the author is drinking some really good or really illegal tea
Irresistible like tea, the more one looked at her, the harder it was to look away. - DemiGod_of_Fate2yrCommented
they have his d**k so far up their throats that they are gurgling his b*lls
"Not just Shanghai, it's the whole country, it's the world! When that time comes, we can at least share some of Mr. Lu's glory!" - DemiGod_of_Fate2yrCommented
@Legion.. Do not kill Manohar that move will cost you more than just readers but potentially a lot of humor later in the novel. just for a short payoff now. . do not do that. Krishna Varaja Manohar is one of the best characters in the novel. I personally like home so much I want a full novel around him. . but am making do with cameos. Chaotic neutral characters are very hard to get right but this one is well done don't let him go
Ch 1766 Light vs Darkness (Part 4) - DemiGod_of_Fate2yrCommented
Blood Magus meets the Confectionery Magus
Lith was certain to never have met the man before, yet his face was oddly familiar. - DemiGod_of_Fate2yrCommented
God of Death meets Lord and Liberator of the Dead
Lith was certain to never have met the man before, yet his face was oddly familiar. - DemiGod_of_Fate2yrCommented
He stayed a low ranker because he was an idiot who didn't deserve it. . over Indulgant aka couldn't keep it in his pants
But between his over-indulgent life and his lack of will to take risks, Eren couldn't grow further beyond a minor D Rank berserker. When he realized his past mistakes, his joints were creaking and his hair had receded further back, almost making him bald. - DemiGod_of_Fate2yrReplied to ScarletDevi
my tts engine pronounced that as Ellipses
"Her name is…" - DemiGod_of_Fate2yrCommented
This would be pointless as Ves can theoretically become immortal with the help of the metal scroll
Succession System - DemiGod_of_Fate2yrCommented
*on his body *stood up from his bed *beauty she had
A giant of a man with many scars in his body standard up from the bed that was shared by a girl who had a pair of lifeless eyes, her face was that of a model, but the clear tear marks in her face ruined the booty that she once had. - DemiGod_of_Fate2yrCommented
his[storage] not her
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the line is repeated.. look two line above
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