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Seriously the chapter length is so low and is irritating to spend spend coins for such a low wording chapter

It's a outright plagiarism which is really appalling, don't read it it's not worth it

The story is bloody without conviction no development of characters boring screenplay.

The main character fade is having psychological troubles he should be determined not some dipshit who was clumsy in his decisions he should learn more about the world and learn to adapt to it not only he is only improvising things which is clumsy and stupid. As a assassin he should be ruthless but not only he is wishy washy it is completely idiotic.

the story plot is average, full of narration and less dialogue but a good attempt.

please change the spelling from fond to found

nice story development and rich world experience

just another web novel about parallel world

the novel us written like narrative style I don't like it

nice novel for just time pass and just surfing kind of thing.

the mc is total piece of shit, a hypocritical piece of shit, and a bastard

abrupt story design and flow of the story is shit. World building is poor.

so much grammatical mistakes such as she sighed instead of signed

terrible screen writing