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An absolutely hooking start to the story with a tad bit of humor set's one's frame of mind for the chapter to come ahead. The world building is fully fleshed out like his previous worksđŻ. Don't know where this one shall lead us in the end but, hoping to get some mythological seasoning!!!(fingers đ€đ»*) #FanNo.283
it is good but better don't make much a dramatic change as an example of earth being destroyed because rudra died well this just removed all the hype you made in the first version as even though his son and daughter died you whould that he will take revenge with the mind of removing werewolf from the existence what's more there must be a traitor to attach his residence so smoothly so how can he not notice even though he is in rage please remake that part as it just like you are burning the pervious novel to power up this one where you forgot that you hinted that the unnamed god was the reason for rebirth can he not forsee this you will say yah but max was reincarnated no that timeline of hard is dead no change can happen if so can't the enemy do this too you messed-up alot of things by doing this as the restrictions are not enough for not even tier 10 should easily do it there are many other things that just make not continuing with this novel now
A fresh take to the overly explored VRMMO genre This book moves forward from general concepts such as rebirth of the thief that roamed the world and reincarnation of the strongest sword god I think it's the sequel to the book strongest guild master by the same author but it feels like a fresh story Every VRMMO fan must give this a try
to those who are up to date with the novel, can you kindly list me the reasons why I should read this novel? I've already looked at the first 5 chapters, and the initial premise of the novel didn't appeal to me at all. i mean, i'm used to stories focused exclusively on the mc, and his training to become strong, after being reincarnated. so it's hard for me to come up with something like the brother was strong, he was considered the savior by many, and the angel who helps mc because he owes his brother a favor, and so on. What I wrote above might be a bit incorrect, as I read the novel more than 2 months ago. I hope you can provide me with licking details, which can make me want to read this novel again, since in the last period I have run out of interesting novels to read, and I don't want to sift through them one by one. Thank you
Hi author, this is a great novel you have here, and I like your writing style, but author can you, maybe, get an editor?? Because the punctuation is so bad. for instance you write something like "hey, Max". Instead of something like this: "Hey, Max." the period is supposed to be in inside the quotation. have spot some other mistake as well but that would make this review longer. Author I really like this book and your writing style, so I'm suggesting you go to YouTube and search "how to use comma and other punctuation videos" assure you you would be a master within weeks